Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Scrambled Eggs"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from BethShelby
It seems Miranda has a supporting and loving mother. I'm sure she has been in this story before but it's my first time reading about her. The shop lifters are a funny couple of old ladies. Miranda enjoys them but watches them carefully.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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It seems Miranda has a supporting and loving mother. I'm sure she has been in this story before but it's my first time reading about her. The shop lifters are a funny couple of old ladies. Miranda enjoys them but watches them carefully.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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The old ladies are a hoot. Like Thelma and Louise. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Don't you just love those old dears? I don't think I'd have the nerve to go into a male strip joint, LOL. Miranda's mum is really nice, and very wise. I love scrambled eggs but haven't had any for ages. Now, when is Dougie going to show his lying face? I really don't believe he wants his son, he just uses the poor boy. Once he has what he came for, (whatever that could be) he'll be off again. Waylon is clutching at straws, he wants desperately for his father to come and say he loves him. That won't happen either, the only person Dougie loves, is himself. Another excellent chapter, my friend.
I'm only coming on to read yours and Carol's (begin again) I can't pluck up interest in anything else at the moment. Each time I think I'm getting somewhere, I end up in the hospital again. I think it might be because the first anniversary of my younger brother's death is fast approaching.
Anyway, you don't want to hear about that. I am really looking forward to discovering what Dougie is after. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Don't you just love those old dears? I don't think I'd have the nerve to go into a male strip joint, LOL. Miranda's mum is really nice, and very wise. I love scrambled eggs but haven't had any for ages. Now, when is Dougie going to show his lying face? I really don't believe he wants his son, he just uses the poor boy. Once he has what he came for, (whatever that could be) he'll be off again. Waylon is clutching at straws, he wants desperately for his father to come and say he loves him. That won't happen either, the only person Dougie loves, is himself. Another excellent chapter, my friend.
I'm only coming on to read yours and Carol's (begin again) I can't pluck up interest in anything else at the moment. Each time I think I'm getting somewhere, I end up in the hospital again. I think it might be because the first anniversary of my younger brother's death is fast approaching.
Anyway, you don't want to hear about that. I am really looking forward to discovering what Dougie is after. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Somehow, Dougie has latched on to some information that Miranda doesn't know yet. It will be revealed later. I'm sorry you keep getting sick. Stress is a bad thing. I'll say a prayer for you and if it's okay put you on my church prayer list this Sunday. Thank you for this awesome review and the extra star. Feel better and take care of yourself. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
This was good and I hope I see more about Dougie and Waylon. Sorry I missed te last chapter but I did read it through, just now. Keep it coming I am not sure I had a reminder for the last.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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This was good and I hope I see more about Dougie and Waylon. Sorry I missed te last chapter but I did read it through, just now. Keep it coming I am not sure I had a reminder for the last.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you. Sometimes I don't get notifications either. Not sure what happens. But thank you for catching up and for this nice review and the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the comment about the strippers! Ha ha ha, you are funny Gretchen. The older us women get, the more demanding we are it seems! Ha ha ha, another fun chapter, love Dolly x x x
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I love the comment about the strippers! Ha ha ha, you are funny Gretchen. The older us women get, the more demanding we are it seems! Ha ha ha, another fun chapter, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Why waste time on things you can't use or don't really want. Though, I cringe at the thought of either of those ladies with a young guy. Lol. Thank you for this spot on review. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Those two old biddies have a bit of cheek, turning up again, but at least this time they knew to pay for their puchases. They kid themselves a bit about the strippers, perhaps. Miranda's mother sounds wonderful, straight-talking and with a heart of gold. And I think Waylon will soon see the reality of what life with his father would be like and will choose to stay with M.
Wendy
Edit: He (He's) still level headed and pragmatic
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Those two old biddies have a bit of cheek, turning up again, but at least this time they knew to pay for their puchases. They kid themselves a bit about the strippers, perhaps. Miranda's mother sounds wonderful, straight-talking and with a heart of gold. And I think Waylon will soon see the reality of what life with his father would be like and will choose to stay with M.
Wendy
Edit: He (He's) still level headed and pragmatic
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much for that. Sometimes breakfast with mom puts everything in perspective. Waylon's smart. He will be able to smell a con if there ever is one. Much appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Miranda sees her mum, and gets a boost, isn't that what mums are for? Mum points out Waylon is still pretty, He surely knows that his father is not worthy of trust. Miranda has a bit of fun with Rita and Brenda, and is on good terms with them, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Miranda sees her mum, and gets a boost, isn't that what mums are for? Mum points out Waylon is still pretty, He surely knows that his father is not worthy of trust. Miranda has a bit of fun with Rita and Brenda, and is on good terms with them, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : He's fine! He('s) still...
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Roy. Making the problems of life go away is exactly what mom's are for. You nailed it. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from lyenochka
Those old ladies are a hoot! I guess it lightens up the mood after the heart to heart with her mom. It's good that Miranda has the support of her mom and of Mitch! Now if she would just believe them so she wouldn't worry about losing Waylon. As for that reporter, it sounds she works for a gossip column?
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Those old ladies are a hoot! I guess it lightens up the mood after the heart to heart with her mom. It's good that Miranda has the support of her mom and of Mitch! Now if she would just believe them so she wouldn't worry about losing Waylon. As for that reporter, it sounds she works for a gossip column?
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
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The reporter might not be after a story about Waylon. Thank you so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Miranda's Mama sure knows how to make Miranda feel better, at least until that reporter starts bothering her. She certainly knows how to be kind to the two old ladies after they prove they aren't stealing anything that day.
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Miranda's Mama sure knows how to make Miranda feel better, at least until that reporter starts bothering her. She certainly knows how to be kind to the two old ladies after they prove they aren't stealing anything that day.
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
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Miranda probably feels a kinship to the two old birds. Or she thinks they are entertaining. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen