My Autumn Afternoon
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Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Melissa,
Very nice poem! I enjoyed it.
Just look at all the orange colors in your picture... two little pumpkins, the autumn leaves outside, the candle & lantern, the pillow, the throw, and the curtain ties. And it's raining outside! A good book. Hot chocolate! Who could ask for more? Comfort on a cool damp evening.
"I sink into my cozy chair
while autumn nips the crispy air.
A book, a cuppa something warm,
I think I'll claim this ~ my new norm!"
And my favorite verse,
"Mulled scents of Fall flow through the air;
a spicy apple candle's flare.
It brings a sweet serenity
while nesting with my poetry."
The leaves have really started to fall this past week. They're all over my trail in Grand Bay. Big gray squirrels are hiding nuts for winter, up and down trees as I walk by. It's a beautiful time of year. I can't stop thinking about poor Sally & Jack Law with Hurricane Milton barreling into Florida tomorrow. They didn't evacuate, staying put to ride out the wind and rain.
Beef stew sounds so good! I haven't had my supper yet, and it's almost 7pm. Have you ever tried a little apple cider in your beef stew? It's de-lish-us! But not all the time, just sometimes.
A cozy poem for this time of year, Melissa. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Melissa,
Very nice poem! I enjoyed it.
Just look at all the orange colors in your picture... two little pumpkins, the autumn leaves outside, the candle & lantern, the pillow, the throw, and the curtain ties. And it's raining outside! A good book. Hot chocolate! Who could ask for more? Comfort on a cool damp evening.
"I sink into my cozy chair
while autumn nips the crispy air.
A book, a cuppa something warm,
I think I'll claim this ~ my new norm!"
And my favorite verse,
"Mulled scents of Fall flow through the air;
a spicy apple candle's flare.
It brings a sweet serenity
while nesting with my poetry."
The leaves have really started to fall this past week. They're all over my trail in Grand Bay. Big gray squirrels are hiding nuts for winter, up and down trees as I walk by. It's a beautiful time of year. I can't stop thinking about poor Sally & Jack Law with Hurricane Milton barreling into Florida tomorrow. They didn't evacuate, staying put to ride out the wind and rain.
Beef stew sounds so good! I haven't had my supper yet, and it's almost 7pm. Have you ever tried a little apple cider in your beef stew? It's de-lish-us! But not all the time, just sometimes.
A cozy poem for this time of year, Melissa. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi KB. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. No, I haven't tried apple cider in my stew, but I will give it a try. Sounds unique. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from zanya
Just love it -the ambiance of Autumn so effectively created here - an Autumn afternoon= a good book - and the aromas - thanks for setting the scene for this new season
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Just love it -the ambiance of Autumn so effectively created here - an Autumn afternoon= a good book - and the aromas - thanks for setting the scene for this new season
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Zanya. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
An 8-syllable sonnet, Melissa! We are all getting creative. :) I loved the way you unwind, but when you have to go... go! :-) A very lovely dancing and rhyming poem. I wish we all would find our style. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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An 8-syllable sonnet, Melissa! We are all getting creative. :) I loved the way you unwind, but when you have to go... go! :-) A very lovely dancing and rhyming poem. I wish we all would find our style. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hello Jose. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, My Autumn Afternoon, brings the many comforts which you can allow yourself under the law into the room so that the only thing missing is -- well, nothing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This poem, My Autumn Afternoon, brings the many comforts which you can allow yourself under the law into the room so that the only thing missing is -- well, nothing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Bill. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from Nicki.B
Excellent autumnal poem, I felt the coziness, smells, sounds and loveliness right the way through the stanzas, I think even someone who's least favourite season eas autumn they might be swayed by these lovely scenes. Very enjoyable. Well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Excellent autumnal poem, I felt the coziness, smells, sounds and loveliness right the way through the stanzas, I think even someone who's least favourite season eas autumn they might be swayed by these lovely scenes. Very enjoyable. Well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much Nicki! Really appreciate your review.
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
Autumn is such a cozy time of year with the warm, golden tones of falling leaves, scent of cinnamon and spice in the kitchen and warmth of hot chocolate in our tummies. Your poem captured all the joys of this season. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Autumn is such a cozy time of year with the warm, golden tones of falling leaves, scent of cinnamon and spice in the kitchen and warmth of hot chocolate in our tummies. Your poem captured all the joys of this season. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi June. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
As always this is a marvellous poem Melissa, you are a terrific writer dear girl, the tone of this terrific work is upbeat, but full of the wonderful comfort of the life that you like to lead, this is beautifully written Melissa, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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As always this is a marvellous poem Melissa, you are a terrific writer dear girl, the tone of this terrific work is upbeat, but full of the wonderful comfort of the life that you like to lead, this is beautifully written Melissa, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Roy. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
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Bless you
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a perfect Fall day you present here in your poem. The words flowed easily and the rhymes were well used. You have all the senses involved in your imagery. Lovely writing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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What a perfect Fall day you present here in your poem. The words flowed easily and the rhymes were well used. You have all the senses involved in your imagery. Lovely writing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi Marilyn. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
That's delightful! This should be in some autumn themed magazine or poetry contest. I really liked:
"as old clocks canter into chime,
I snuggle into languid time."
Thanks for share the secret to living well!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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That's delightful! This should be in some autumn themed magazine or poetry contest. I really liked:
"as old clocks canter into chime,
I snuggle into languid time."
Thanks for share the secret to living well!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much Helen! Hugs, dear friend.
Melissa
Comment from gramalot8
You definitely brought into mind the sights, sounds and smells of autumn... along with taste as well.
You paint a very tranquil place to sit and relax during this time of year.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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You definitely brought into mind the sights, sounds and smells of autumn... along with taste as well.
You paint a very tranquil place to sit and relax during this time of year.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Hi there. Thank you for your lovely review of my Autumn verse. I really appreciate you and your words. Thanks again!
Melissa
