Nature's Finest
Looking at the beauty of a spider's web28 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Boy, can I attest to that! I live in the country and have to take a broom to clean off my lights and gutters every day. Spider webs everywhere. Can't believe how fast they can weave them. Well done, Kahlani!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Boy, can I attest to that! I live in the country and have to take a broom to clean off my lights and gutters every day. Spider webs everywhere. Can't believe how fast they can weave them. Well done, Kahlani!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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It's spring in Australia and of course, out come the spider webs.
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I am in Illinois in the States and Autumn is here. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from RodG
I really enjoyed this Nonet which made me pause and ponder how fascinating a spider web truly is. Your description of its adaptability in any clime is striking as well as accurate. Nice job! Rod
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I really enjoyed this Nonet which made me pause and ponder how fascinating a spider web truly is. Your description of its adaptability in any clime is striking as well as accurate. Nice job! Rod
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Rod.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
A great topic. I love to watch spiders making their nets.
They are so quick in spinning their prey in cocoons made with their thread. A gruesome and slow death indeed.
Velvety labyrinths and divine tapestries are great descriptive words ..
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Ciao!
A great topic. I love to watch spiders making their nets.
They are so quick in spinning their prey in cocoons made with their thread. A gruesome and slow death indeed.
Velvety labyrinths and divine tapestries are great descriptive words ..
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your lovely feedback.
Comment from Spitfire
Spider webs are an amazing design (although with a deadly purpose for tiny bugs) I like what you have done with the sizing of the font. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Spider webs are an amazing design (although with a deadly purpose for tiny bugs) I like what you have done with the sizing of the font. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from royowen
I remember hearing about Robert the Bruce a Scottish King and who beat the British and forged independence for Scotland, he was encourage by a spider who kept on trying to built its web, He was fleeing after losing a battle, and he was committed to keep fighting, the encounter was decisive, and won a key battle, beautifully written poem my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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I remember hearing about Robert the Bruce a Scottish King and who beat the British and forged independence for Scotland, he was encourage by a spider who kept on trying to built its web, He was fleeing after losing a battle, and he was committed to keep fighting, the encounter was decisive, and won a key battle, beautifully written poem my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your lovely comments, especially from a gifted fellow writer.
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Bless you dear girl
Comment from Amelie Johns
I'm a big fan of nature and I love how you have taken something as simple as a spiders web and shown us the intricate beauty of it. Perhaps the next time I see a spiders web, I won't be so quick to get rid of it or bypass it.. I might spend a moment to admire it because it really is a work of art. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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I'm a big fan of nature and I love how you have taken something as simple as a spiders web and shown us the intricate beauty of it. Perhaps the next time I see a spiders web, I won't be so quick to get rid of it or bypass it.. I might spend a moment to admire it because it really is a work of art. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Amelie.
Comment from Nicki.B
I love this, the imagery youve used here to portray the fabulous work of the spider. Webs are amazing works of art and I think are highly under appreciated for their structure and beauty. You've captured that perfectly I'm your poem.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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I love this, the imagery youve used here to portray the fabulous work of the spider. Webs are amazing works of art and I think are highly under appreciated for their structure and beauty. You've captured that perfectly I'm your poem.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Nicki. I agree with you-just look at the beautiful photo.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Your nonet follows the required syllable count and has a wonderful centering to it... I would suggest finding a different end word for either clime or shine as the rhyme actually throws off your non-rhyme rhythm here... Love the use of 'velvety labyrinth' as it speaks to both sight and feel! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Your nonet follows the required syllable count and has a wonderful centering to it... I would suggest finding a different end word for either clime or shine as the rhyme actually throws off your non-rhyme rhythm here... Love the use of 'velvety labyrinth' as it speaks to both sight and feel! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the suggestion. I'll work on that part. I really appreciate your honest feedback.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Nonet Poetry contest. Such vivid descriptions of a spider's web and how they are created. They are one of nature's most perfect designs and so beautiful to view. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the Nonet Poetry contest. Such vivid descriptions of a spider's web and how they are created. They are one of nature's most perfect designs and so beautiful to view. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn. I feel the same way.
Comment from Katiemae1977
This is really, really good Kahlani. You did an excellent job with a difficult form. I've tried these but failed miserably
Good luck with this well done nonet
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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This is really, really good Kahlani. You did an excellent job with a difficult form. I've tried these but failed miserably
Good luck with this well done nonet
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
