Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a heartfelt poem! I really like how you captured the feeling of God's calling and how you are ready to serve. I found this to be a beautiful message of faith. The sincerity in your words is wonderful - this rings so true. I could easily to connect with the emotions you're sharing . Thank you for sharing it!

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024

Thank you so much. I wrote this poem years ago and I have only just found it again.

Comment from Sarah Probe S.

Excellent

This is a great powerful prayer within a very captivating poem, thanks for such an inspirational spiritual poetry, about your personal connection with God.
Best wishes,
Sarah

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024

Thank you, Sarah. I wrote the poem years ago and only just found it again.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed the approach to this experience here and I enjoyed your faithful and loving words as our prayers are answered, a fine post for the contest with good rhymes and flow, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024

Thank you, Dolly. I wrote this poem years ago and have kept it safely tucked away.