Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

So much violence on this fishing trip. I guess this story/poem had a good ending. I'm curious why didn't they fish instead of killing each other. I guess maybe I missed something. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Well, well, well.
Guess you could just about put anything in the old attic that you had a mind to.
Before it ended, six lost their tale - (tail?)
The rhyming might have been a bit contrived and forced, but it perfectly matched your theme song. Great work! (sincere face here)

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

A fish in the attic isn't probably the best place for it to be. But I'm sure if the nose catches a whiff it won't be hard to recognize scent. Thank for sharing another fine poem.

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024