Pumpkin Spice Freaks
5-7-5 for contest19 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A good opening line announcing the arrival of fall.
-A good second line acknowledging those who
like all things pumpkin.
-A very good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest,
and I like pumpkin in pies and cookies,
as well as ice cream.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A good opening line announcing the arrival of fall.
-A good second line acknowledging those who
like all things pumpkin.
-A very good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest,
and I like pumpkin in pies and cookies,
as well as ice cream.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Hi Pam. I've never heard of pumpkin ice cream. I'm sure it's good.
Thanks so very much for reviewing!
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Pumpkin ice cream is very good. I don't know where you're from, but Edie's usually makes it. It's usually just out in the fall.
Comment from Begin Again
One for my daughter and granddaughter for sure. I stopped and let her go in to McDonald's to get lunch before going to her appointment...lunch was the iced drink. Since when did coffee become food?
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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One for my daughter and granddaughter for sure. I stopped and let her go in to McDonald's to get lunch before going to her appointment...lunch was the iced drink. Since when did coffee become food?
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Hi Carol. Thanks so very much for reviewing. I love my McDonald's Iced Mocha Frappe. That's my obsession.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
At least it's actually Fall now. It irks me when the pumpkin spice stuff begins in early September...kind of like when the Christmas decorations come out in middle September!! Really, no one believes in delayed gratification anymore!!
Anyway, very cute haiku, and I hope it serves you well at the polls! xo
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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At least it's actually Fall now. It irks me when the pumpkin spice stuff begins in early September...kind of like when the Christmas decorations come out in middle September!! Really, no one believes in delayed gratification anymore!!
Anyway, very cute haiku, and I hope it serves you well at the polls! xo
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Ha, ha really. I think delayed gratification went out with the dodo bird.
Thanks so very much for your review and good luck wishes!
Take care!
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Possibly even the pterydactyl!
Comment from judiverse
Aw, what do you have against pumpkin spice? Great flavor for coffee creamer, ice cream, etc. I could enjoy anything pumpkin all year long. I love when Olive Garden has its pumpkin cheesecake. Great alliteration in tis, and enjoyable to read. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Aw, what do you have against pumpkin spice? Great flavor for coffee creamer, ice cream, etc. I could enjoy anything pumpkin all year long. I love when Olive Garden has its pumpkin cheesecake. Great alliteration in tis, and enjoyable to read. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Hi judiverse. I have my own obsessive fave, I just don't like the pumpkin spice flavor.
Thanks so much for reviewing and for the good luck wishes!
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You're so welcome. judi
Comment from Kahlani
I'm Australian, so I'm not so much a pumpkin spice freak! This poem was fun. It flows nicely and shows your sense of humor. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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I'm Australian, so I'm not so much a pumpkin spice freak! This poem was fun. It flows nicely and shows your sense of humor. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my, Mystery Poet, you picked one of my guilty pleasures!! How I love me some Pumpkin Spice, just about anything. But, coffee, even more so.
This was an attractive and delightful poem heralding in the season and appealing to a broad audience.
Great job,
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Oh my, Mystery Poet, you picked one of my guilty pleasures!! How I love me some Pumpkin Spice, just about anything. But, coffee, even more so.
This was an attractive and delightful poem heralding in the season and appealing to a broad audience.
Great job,
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Like I said....feel free to indulge. I have my own.guilty pleasure it's just not pumpkin spice
Thanks so much for reviewing Rhonda!
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Hehe, you'll have to share it later!!
Comment from DonandVicki
AHHH yes the refreshing coolness of fall. Pumpkin spice anything. A well composed 5-7-5 and good syllable count. Good graphics to enhance your well composed haiku.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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AHHH yes the refreshing coolness of fall. Pumpkin spice anything. A well composed 5-7-5 and good syllable count. Good graphics to enhance your well composed haiku.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore pumpkins, they are juicy, humorous and nourishing. I must put pen to paper and celebrate the pumpkin just like you have here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I adore pumpkins, they are juicy, humorous and nourishing. I must put pen to paper and celebrate the pumpkin just like you have here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I love.pumpkins as well but don't like pumpkin spice. I'm going to try this year to try a piece of pumkin pie and get to like it.
Thanks so much for reviewing Dolly.
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I just couldn't help myself after reading your post, I had to write about those magical pumpkins! Ha ha ha x x x
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Lol
Comment from Janet Foor
A fun "Fall" poem for the 5/7/5 writing prompt. I love pumpkin so I guess I'm one of those deranged pumpkin spice freaks. Haha
Nicely done with good use of alliteration as well.
Blessings
Janet
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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A fun "Fall" poem for the 5/7/5 writing prompt. I love pumpkin so I guess I'm one of those deranged pumpkin spice freaks. Haha
Nicely done with good use of alliteration as well.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Hi Janet.
Thanks so very much for reviewing! I happen to not like pumpkin spice but those that do seem a bit obsessive.
Thanks again!