Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Ducking"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I so wish Dougie was not back in Waylon's life. I have a feeling he'll only get hurt and it'll be worse this time. I can't wait to read more. This is a very good addition to the novel. I received 'Saltwater Ghosts' the other day. Great job!!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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I so wish Dougie was not back in Waylon's life. I have a feeling he'll only get hurt and it'll be worse this time. I can't wait to read more. This is a very good addition to the novel. I received 'Saltwater Ghosts' the other day. Great job!!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you! That means a lot. As far as Dougie, he's a narcissist and we know they use the very ones who love them.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Kids are forgiving. Miranda is the Adult. Dougie is his pal his friend. He never gave Waylon limits, or time, or his concern. This will be a madhouse. I wanna jump into that story and wring his neck. Dougie would be squashed flat when I bounced up and down on his body until I tired myself out. :-)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Kids are forgiving. Miranda is the Adult. Dougie is his pal his friend. He never gave Waylon limits, or time, or his concern. This will be a madhouse. I wanna jump into that story and wring his neck. Dougie would be squashed flat when I bounced up and down on his body until I tired myself out. :-)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Lol. I appreciate your lively review. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Just when Miranda was getting things sorted, all the cards are thrown in the air again. Of course Miranda needs her momma. She's fit to burst and Mitch is just far too sensible! Another great chapter, Gretchen, with beautiful dialogue, as ever. Take care Debbie
anger and resentment seem to be ta(k)ing up all of the room
I'm not your mom or you(r) aunt
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Just when Miranda was getting things sorted, all the cards are thrown in the air again. Of course Miranda needs her momma. She's fit to burst and Mitch is just far too sensible! Another great chapter, Gretchen, with beautiful dialogue, as ever. Take care Debbie
anger and resentment seem to be ta(k)ing up all of the room
I'm not your mom or you(r) aunt
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. Appreciate your comments and for spotting those edits. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The elusive Dougie will finally make an appearance? I am glad he has contacted his son and put him out of his misery, your story has moved on Gretchen and Waylon is finally relieved that he will see his father, a fine chapter, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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The elusive Dougie will finally make an appearance? I am glad he has contacted his son and put him out of his misery, your story has moved on Gretchen and Waylon is finally relieved that he will see his father, a fine chapter, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Dougie will appear but it probably won't be a good thing. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a traumatic chapter, but good for Waylon. That teacher is needing to be given a good lesson!! Mrs Fine was right. The advice she gave Miranda was spot on. Now, is Dougie here for good for his son? I, like Miranda, think not! If he hurts Waylon again, I don't think Miranda will be able to control her temper. Another excellent chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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That was a traumatic chapter, but good for Waylon. That teacher is needing to be given a good lesson!! Mrs Fine was right. The advice she gave Miranda was spot on. Now, is Dougie here for good for his son? I, like Miranda, think not! If he hurts Waylon again, I don't think Miranda will be able to control her temper. Another excellent chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Sandra. Mrs. Fine doesn't mince words. Lol. Of course, Dougie is back, but not for Waylon. He has information that no one else has. Things should get interesting. Thank you so much for the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
I feel sorry for Miranda. She might be feeling like an outsider .The lack of anger on Waylon's side is a dampening thing for her especially after this showdown ..I am quite eager to read the next chapter..
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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I feel sorry for Miranda. She might be feeling like an outsider .The lack of anger on Waylon's side is a dampening thing for her especially after this showdown ..I am quite eager to read the next chapter..
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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You nailed it. She got snubbed for standing up for Waylon and his own father deserted him. Thank you. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
You completely nailed this. I'm so sorry that impetuous me is out of sixes bc this deserves one in the biggest way. This is a masterpiece of a chapter. Kids forgive the worst parenting behavior. Xo
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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You completely nailed this. I'm so sorry that impetuous me is out of sixes bc this deserves one in the biggest way. This is a masterpiece of a chapter. Kids forgive the worst parenting behavior. Xo
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Desperation to have the absent parent back. I'm glad Miranda told him she loves him. That helped diffuse the situation. I'm sure anger will come to Waylon. It would have to. Forget about the six. Your review is all I need. Gretchen
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Comment from Ang Tang
This excerpt from *Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet* highlights the chaos of parenting, particularly for Miranda as she navigates her complicated relationship with Waylon and the return of his estranged father, Dougie. Miranda's inner turmoil is palpable as she grapples with her attempts to be a supportive figure while feeling utterly out of her depth. The dialogue between Miranda and Mrs. Fine is entertaining, capturing the judgmental yet relatable nature of unsolicited parenting advice, but it also adds to the overwhelming feeling that Miranda is in over her head.
The emotional stakes rise when Waylon receives a call from Dougie, transforming the narrative into a mix of excitement and apprehension. However, the abrupt shift from Miranda's internal struggle to Waylon's unfiltered joy feels jarring, as it glosses over the complexities of his feelings about his father's sudden reappearance.
**Rating: 3 stars.** While the interactions are engaging and relatable, the emotional transitions could be smoother to better capture the characters' deeper conflicts.
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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This excerpt from *Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet* highlights the chaos of parenting, particularly for Miranda as she navigates her complicated relationship with Waylon and the return of his estranged father, Dougie. Miranda's inner turmoil is palpable as she grapples with her attempts to be a supportive figure while feeling utterly out of her depth. The dialogue between Miranda and Mrs. Fine is entertaining, capturing the judgmental yet relatable nature of unsolicited parenting advice, but it also adds to the overwhelming feeling that Miranda is in over her head.
The emotional stakes rise when Waylon receives a call from Dougie, transforming the narrative into a mix of excitement and apprehension. However, the abrupt shift from Miranda's internal struggle to Waylon's unfiltered joy feels jarring, as it glosses over the complexities of his feelings about his father's sudden reappearance.
**Rating: 3 stars.** While the interactions are engaging and relatable, the emotional transitions could be smoother to better capture the characters' deeper conflicts.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for this thorough and detailed review. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Miranda makes a lot of mistakes, she leads with her tongue, but I'm sorry you're not giving Waylon's teacher a piece of your mind, teachers can't get away with that anymore. I can remember I got more curry from the teachers than the students, well done Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Miranda makes a lot of mistakes, she leads with her tongue, but I'm sorry you're not giving Waylon's teacher a piece of your mind, teachers can't get away with that anymore. I can remember I got more curry from the teachers than the students, well done Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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I have a feeling there will be more encounters with the teacher. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Oh wow, I am really feeling for Miranda right now. As she says, nothing is going right for her, although she has the best of intentions. I too am annoyed with Dougie, thinking he can just waltz back into their lives. Hmm. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Wendy
Edit: I'm not your mom or you're (your) aunt.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Oh wow, I am really feeling for Miranda right now. As she says, nothing is going right for her, although she has the best of intentions. I too am annoyed with Dougie, thinking he can just waltz back into their lives. Hmm. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Wendy
Edit: I'm not your mom or you're (your) aunt.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. I'm guessing Waylon will go through the anger stage once he sees his dad a couple of times. He will have questions. Thanks for catching those edits. Gretchen