Promise Me Tomorrow
When there are no more todays20 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is an emotional story, especially when he breathes his last. You gave us several clues that this would be their final night together. Good descriptions throughout. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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This is an emotional story, especially when he breathes his last. You gave us several clues that this would be their final night together. Good descriptions throughout. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Yes, it was a difficult write but also a good one. It seems like I cry a river of tears while I type but when I am done, it feels like I connected and everything is okay. Thanks for the review and your comments.
Smiles, Carol
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I can only imagine how difficult it was to write this. You did well! Hugs.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Yesterday, I read the title of this post, and saw the picture and knew I was too emotional to read the story. I knew your details and descriptions would be filled with gentle, raw emotions and didn't feel I could handle it. You have a way of touching the heart of your readers and helping them understand what you are feeling. Today, I am a soggy mess after reading this, but appreciate your strength and ability to express your feelings. You help those who share your experiences, as well as those who are previewing part of the grieving process.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Yesterday, I read the title of this post, and saw the picture and knew I was too emotional to read the story. I knew your details and descriptions would be filled with gentle, raw emotions and didn't feel I could handle it. You have a way of touching the heart of your readers and helping them understand what you are feeling. Today, I am a soggy mess after reading this, but appreciate your strength and ability to express your feelings. You help those who share your experiences, as well as those who are previewing part of the grieving process.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Oh, Lorraine! I am sorry that I made you cry and be unhappy. I've been really a mess f late to, but when I write these stories...I cry a flooding river, but I also gain so much too. I remember all the wonderful blessing I had and how I was the one chosen to receive them...I've had terrible tragedies i my life, but every minute with Mike was worth it.
Thank you for the wonderful review, your kindness, and for always being my friend... I am blessed because of you!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
How many 'Tomorrows' can we have before we run out? Only God knows. Your story of Mike's passing resonated with me, and I'm sure with many on here. Brian was 45 when he died, leaving me at 38 with two young children, 12 and 14, to raise on my own. They were my everything, and they carried me through the years as we grew older together. Now they are fathers themselves, with children both older than they were when they lost their dad. Tomorrow doesn't belong to us, unfortunately. You were brave sharing those last hours you had with Mike. I can see your tears, and I can 'hear' that silence. There is nothing like it. Very well written, my dear friend. Now I'm off to have a cuppa and wash my face! Love and hugs. Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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How many 'Tomorrows' can we have before we run out? Only God knows. Your story of Mike's passing resonated with me, and I'm sure with many on here. Brian was 45 when he died, leaving me at 38 with two young children, 12 and 14, to raise on my own. They were my everything, and they carried me through the years as we grew older together. Now they are fathers themselves, with children both older than they were when they lost their dad. Tomorrow doesn't belong to us, unfortunately. You were brave sharing those last hours you had with Mike. I can see your tears, and I can 'hear' that silence. There is nothing like it. Very well written, my dear friend. Now I'm off to have a cuppa and wash my face! Love and hugs. Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Good afternoon, Sandra!
Is that a cuppa of coffee or tea? I love that word, you know. It just makes the moment of drinking coffee seem just a tad bit more elegant.. A bit of royalty, you know. LOL
Thanks for reading this one. Yes, you know the feelings that come with those last moments..knowing its coming but pushing it back in your mind like it will disappear or at least be delayed. I flooded the keyboard while I wrote it, but I am thrilled that I was able to write it.
I know my tomorrows are dwindling down and the time will come, but I can accept it. I'm not in a hurry, though once I was, but when it is my time, those that I love should know that I was ready.... (well, if I've published a book by then) LOL.
Take care, my dear. Hope you are feeling better. Thank you for reading and reviewing. You are always appreciated.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Goodness, I am sure this was a hard write. It was certainly hard to read! All I can say is that you have expressed grief and emotion with powerful and moving words, but I will add that it is given to few to know such depth of love. Beautifully written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Goodness, I am sure this was a hard write. It was certainly hard to read! All I can say is that you have expressed grief and emotion with powerful and moving words, but I will add that it is given to few to know such depth of love. Beautifully written.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Almost had my keyboard floating away! LOL I get quite emotional when I write and always hope its not too much for the reader. I thank you for understanding how important this was for me.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Oh, dear God in heaven -- I'm as soggy as a limp rag right now! This is beyond all human boundaries of grief. It is a precious quill dipped in the magical golden inkwell of memories and love and etched upon my heart.
I'm looking to my right and noticing you are currently the #7 ranked Author, #1 ranked Novelist, and #1 ranked Reviewer.
I hope the Lord and Mike's messages are helping you realize your true worth and amazing gift as a writer.
Just in case you needed one more push to hold that brilliant head up high.
I think you're wonderful in every way.
Love,
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Oh, dear God in heaven -- I'm as soggy as a limp rag right now! This is beyond all human boundaries of grief. It is a precious quill dipped in the magical golden inkwell of memories and love and etched upon my heart.
I'm looking to my right and noticing you are currently the #7 ranked Author, #1 ranked Novelist, and #1 ranked Reviewer.
I hope the Lord and Mike's messages are helping you realize your true worth and amazing gift as a writer.
Just in case you needed one more push to hold that brilliant head up high.
I think you're wonderful in every way.
Love,
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Darn! I just stopped crying and now the faucet is running full blast again. I even jumped into writing all day trying to keep my thoughts elsewhere. It didn't work. Though I did warn you, right? Thanks for always supporting my writing.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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I do support your writing. Mostly, I'm in awe of it.
Comment from royowen
It sounds a little like me, promising Elaine that I'd take care of something that was bothering her, (but not me) but never getting around to it, but I think she'd rather hear that, rather than no sign of life, beautifully written dear Carol, great story, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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It sounds a little like me, promising Elaine that I'd take care of something that was bothering her, (but not me) but never getting around to it, but I think she'd rather hear that, rather than no sign of life, beautifully written dear Carol, great story, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Yes, I would love to have him here and nothing getting done...like when he was sick at the end.... but the Lord had different plans. And I do know that it was for the best since he is no longer in any pain. Thank you so much for the kindness and the stars. I am blessed!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Would you quit doing that? You are wrenching my heart out through my guts. This was absolutely marvelous, but so extremly moving I am wrung out. You are terrific at this stuff. Consider my heartstrings properly plucked. Karen
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Would you quit doing that? You are wrenching my heart out through my guts. This was absolutely marvelous, but so extremly moving I am wrung out. You are terrific at this stuff. Consider my heartstrings properly plucked. Karen
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Just figured everyone needed their eyes washed, right? I've cleaned mine enough to last the rest of the year. Thanks so much, Karen. I do appreciate you and the review.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment from patcelaw
I'm sitting here reading this and tears of flooring for my face as I read. This is the day before my husband was to be buried 29 years ago two days ago was the day he died and the night before he died my last visit in the hospital was With him I said to him as I was ready to leave, which I had to do to get some rest I said I'll see you in the morning and he looked at being smile and I never got to see him in the morning alive. It was gone. I arrived at the hospital so morning is still coming for me And I will see him in that great getting up morning in heaven. Thanks for sharing this lovely story. I love your stories. Patricia.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I'm sitting here reading this and tears of flooring for my face as I read. This is the day before my husband was to be buried 29 years ago two days ago was the day he died and the night before he died my last visit in the hospital was With him I said to him as I was ready to leave, which I had to do to get some rest I said I'll see you in the morning and he looked at being smile and I never got to see him in the morning alive. It was gone. I arrived at the hospital so morning is still coming for me And I will see him in that great getting up morning in heaven. Thanks for sharing this lovely story. I love your stories. Patricia.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Patricia...I've been crying with every word, and I knew you would do the same. Thank you so much and I hope you know that he's waiting for you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
There's no fixing that tomorrow. The emotion of this post was heartfelt. I could feel the stillness of the room. Thank you for sharing this with us. I hoped it helped you by writing it.
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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There's no fixing that tomorrow. The emotion of this post was heartfelt. I could feel the stillness of the room. Thank you for sharing this with us. I hoped it helped you by writing it.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I cried a lot but lately that's what I do. I didn't think I ws going to get the novel chapter done...usually it's the morning, but I started it yesterday. Thaks for asking. And thanks for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
OMG Carol. I have to write this review later. I can't see my screen.
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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OMG Carol. I have to write this review later. I can't see my screen.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Then that makes two of us! I was just re=reading when I saw someone had reviewed. You are the first and I am blessed. thank you so much for loving the story.
Hugs, Carol
