Ad Infinitum
Cube poem about time-tested friendships16 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I just read a review of my work from Robert, then went to his page to read something of his. What a coincidence that you mention him now.
A couple of lines that I really like:
No unmet needs (that's a strong friendship when you love them for the sake of love alone)
Strength in numbers; with us, that's two. Again, if you find the right friend, you can enjoy them without the need for anything or anyone else.
I'm not sure what a cube poem is; perhaps you could mention that in your author's notes:-)
This was a good one, Allen. Loved the rhymes and the story you tell of a special relationship with another human.
xoxo
P
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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I just read a review of my work from Robert, then went to his page to read something of his. What a coincidence that you mention him now.
A couple of lines that I really like:
No unmet needs (that's a strong friendship when you love them for the sake of love alone)
Strength in numbers; with us, that's two. Again, if you find the right friend, you can enjoy them without the need for anything or anyone else.
I'm not sure what a cube poem is; perhaps you could mention that in your author's notes:-)
This was a good one, Allen. Loved the rhymes and the story you tell of a special relationship with another human.
xoxo
P
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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It's four stanzas of four lines that contain four syllables. But you're right; it needs to be explained in tge Author's Notes. Thanks for this really nice review. Xo
Comment from lyenochka
What a sweet welcome back to Robert Zimmerman. I knew that he was gone for a while and here you show us that he's back. That's what friends do and it's a special honor that you used his form!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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What a sweet welcome back to Robert Zimmerman. I knew that he was gone for a while and here you show us that he's back. That's what friends do and it's a special honor that you used his form!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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It seemed only fair since he taught me how to do it. Thank you for this nice review, Helen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love this form and your uplifting well metered words are a joy to read Rachelle. We are mightier as a couple and being alone means you have to maintain that inner courage. A joy to read, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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I love this form and your uplifting well metered words are a joy to read Rachelle. We are mightier as a couple and being alone means you have to maintain that inner courage. A joy to read, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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This is such a nice review, Dolly. Thank you. Xo
Comment from Wendy G
That is indeed a lovely cube poem, celebrating true and meaningful friendship, and its beautiful qualities. I am sure Robert is very pleased with your beautiful and well-written poem. It is super!
Wendy
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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That is indeed a lovely cube poem, celebrating true and meaningful friendship, and its beautiful qualities. I am sure Robert is very pleased with your beautiful and well-written poem. It is super!
Wendy
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Thank you for this warm and encouraging review, Wendy. Xo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
First , allow me to say the most important thing is , "You did you proud." Actually, you did us BOTH proud. Thank you for taking this challenge to create poetry in a form you have not studied or written... ever.
Your context is meaningful and fulfilling to the reader. Your rhymes are exact. I am honored you took this challenge and wrote a beautiful poem with depth, and meaning, the reader can identify with.
YOU DUN GREAT!!!!!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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First , allow me to say the most important thing is , "You did you proud." Actually, you did us BOTH proud. Thank you for taking this challenge to create poetry in a form you have not studied or written... ever.
Your context is meaningful and fulfilling to the reader. Your rhymes are exact. I am honored you took this challenge and wrote a beautiful poem with depth, and meaning, the reader can identify with.
YOU DUN GREAT!!!!!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Thank you!! This means the world to me. Xoxo
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We got caught in the hurricane. No power, no Internet, no cell, no nothing. Do not expect to be restored for days. Western NC got hammered.
Your cube poem is excellent.
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Oh noooo!! Hunker down and read to your heart's content. I'm sending you Be Safe vibes!! xoxox
Comment from judiverse
I'm glad to see Robert back, too, and I experimented a few times with his
Robert's CUBE. You did such a great theme with yours and you had such lovely thoughts on friendship. You certainly expressed the eloquently. Excellent work with rhyme, too. judi
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I'm glad to see Robert back, too, and I experimented a few times with his
Robert's CUBE. You did such a great theme with yours and you had such lovely thoughts on friendship. You certainly expressed the eloquently. Excellent work with rhyme, too. judi
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Thank you for all of this, Judi. You always have the nicest way of making me feel good about what I've posted. Xo
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You're welcome. Still haven't gotten around to trying Richard's Cube, but I will. judi