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Biblical Perplexities

What if they hadn't sinned?

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Comment from Wayne Fowler
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100% on target. And Adam, charged with naming the animals, which I interpret to mean 'understand' them - their characteristics and qualities, had a full appreciation for procreation.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Hey, I never gave thought that is how he and she figured out procreation. 😳
Comment from Sallyo
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Original sin is presumably the sins of the fathers thing which does seem unfortunate. As you said, silly is... but this one gave me a smile. I like the picture too though I'm unsure about the shower-heady thingie.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    The thingee is emblematic of a priest hearing confession and the character is musing what it needed to confess
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hi Tom. I have just returned after a 3-year hiatus from FS. This is an entertaining piece I read this morning. Your observation of Adm and Eve is quite interesting. I like your "view" of our origins. I was baptized at 28. I got all wet that day. I enjoyed your writing and appreciated your question.

Z

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Welcome back
    I recently thought of going on hiatus since I write so infrequently recently
    Thanks for reading and reviewing
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 23-Sep-2024
    You're welcome!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Thoughts I have whirled around in my own brain a time or two being raised Lutheran and sprinkled (baptized) as a baby. Thanks for sharing your complex mind.

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 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Smile you are in Candid Tales of an unabashed mind
Comment from Begin Again
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I should have known only you, my friend, would take the reader down this bath of what happened in the Garden of Eden.....
Thanks for the bit of humor.
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Aaah. I have a place in the world after all. Thanks.?
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Aaah. I have a place in the world after all. Thanks.?
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Aaah. I have a place in the world after all. Thanks.?
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Aaah. I have a place in the world after all. Thanks.?
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Aaah. I have a place in the world after all. Thanks.?