2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a beautifully expressive Haiku, including a simile and alliteration. Yes, friendship makes our lives brighter in many ways. I appreciate your including the rules and examples of Haiku. I'll read the other attachments tomorrow, as my brain is ready for sleep. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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This is a beautifully expressive Haiku, including a simile and alliteration. Yes, friendship makes our lives brighter in many ways. I appreciate your including the rules and examples of Haiku. I'll read the other attachments tomorrow, as my brain is ready for sleep. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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You're most welcome. I enjoyed your lovely Haiku. Have a blessed weekend.
Comment from RJ Heritage
The shining friendship as personified by the brilliant moon and stars are a testament to the power of friendship. This kind of relationship is a light in tge dark.
RJ
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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The shining friendship as personified by the brilliant moon and stars are a testament to the power of friendship. This kind of relationship is a light in tge dark.
RJ
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from GWHARGIS
I used to love thinking that if I looked up at the stars, my friends who lived far away were looking at the same stars. It was a way to feel connected despite the miles. This was a very cool poem. Gretchen
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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I used to love thinking that if I looked up at the stars, my friends who lived far away were looking at the same stars. It was a way to feel connected despite the miles. This was a very cool poem. Gretchen
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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I do the same with a good friend who lives in New Zealand but we share Venus.
Thank you very much, Gretchen 😊