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Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very good addition to this book. I can't wait to see what Jane brings to this, other than to drive you crazy. It should be fun addition. I can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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This is a very good addition to this book. I can't wait to see what Jane brings to this, other than to drive you crazy. It should be fun addition. I can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Shes going to do more than drive me crazy. It should be an eye opening ride. Thanks so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHA. And we thought Amish Country was bad. At least it was wide open and no strange PEOPLE - just a strange situation! Should be interesting to see how Lucy and Ethel do with THIS new challenge.
You've drawn Jane great already. We're ALL interested to see how long it takes for her personality to shine through and ruin this already precarious road trip even more. This ought to make Rebekah appreciate Amish Life!!!
Great chapter, Gretchen, and I loved the tender moment you shared with Hannah. Perfection.
xoxoxo
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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HAHAHAHA. And we thought Amish Country was bad. At least it was wide open and no strange PEOPLE - just a strange situation! Should be interesting to see how Lucy and Ethel do with THIS new challenge.
You've drawn Jane great already. We're ALL interested to see how long it takes for her personality to shine through and ruin this already precarious road trip even more. This ought to make Rebekah appreciate Amish Life!!!
Great chapter, Gretchen, and I loved the tender moment you shared with Hannah. Perfection.
xoxoxo
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle, for this wonderful review. I do think Jane is going to keep me on the edge of my seat. But we will be stuck together for a while. Thanks for the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed this scene! It was funny and so enjoyable. Gretchen and Jane are so entertaining. I also liked the touching moment with Hannah and the corn husk doll. Great job.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I really enjoyed this scene! It was funny and so enjoyable. Gretchen and Jane are so entertaining. I also liked the touching moment with Hannah and the corn husk doll. Great job.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Gretchen
Comment from pome lover
Well, goodness, I thought this would be all fun and games from here on out, going to the convention, etc. but here is another "hook". You're going to be a blithering idiot by the time you get there.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Well, goodness, I thought this would be all fun and games from here on out, going to the convention, etc. but here is another "hook". You're going to be a blithering idiot by the time you get there.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I'm dangerously close to a slithering idiot some days already. Jane will test all of our patience, even Rebekah. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent. Nicely put together.
I particularly like the "there's always hope" snippet.
It sort of feels like you and Rachelle have converged onto a similar vein. I wonder if that would be the natural course for any two writers engaged in your sort of project.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Excellent. Nicely put together.
I particularly like the "there's always hope" snippet.
It sort of feels like you and Rachelle have converged onto a similar vein. I wonder if that would be the natural course for any two writers engaged in your sort of project.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for this. I guess we are starting to merge our writing a little. Gretchen
Comment from patcelaw
This was a real hoot to listen to. It is always hard to say goodbyes to someone who you have grown very close to even if it's been in a short spell of time. Have a good day and God bless you. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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This was a real hoot to listen to. It is always hard to say goodbyes to someone who you have grown very close to even if it's been in a short spell of time. Have a good day and God bless you. Patricia.
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. I'm glad you could laugh at this. Gretchen
