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Rest in Peace

Do You Wonder..?

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Comment from BethShelby
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You're getting a bit morbid with these seven words, Tom. Lilies don't last long nor have much scent about them. It isn't likely we'll be remembered often after the living get on with their lives, but there will be times we'll be remembered by those who knew us best. I hope those thoughts will be kind ones.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Well, we can hope but the shells that is left won't be hearing them.
    Silly, inn a way, that for 6000 years burials haven't change much.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Beautifully stated, Tom! Whoo deed? This price give done a lot of personal introspection.

We have not connected in awhile. I hope all is well in your world.
D

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    I need to be inspired. Where once upon a time... I wrote twice a day. I haven't written twice in a month for months. Is it the aging process? Thanks for the visit and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I love the photograph and we hope to be remembered when we are gone and the words we leave behind says something about who we were and what we believed in, I enjoyed your post Tom, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you. I haven't posted much this past month, but a review of a eight word challenge made me do it.
Comment from Sally Law
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The way the world is headed, I do. The way the life of the unborn child is treated as expendable and the little ones not cared for; I wonder who will stop and greet the children of our future and smell take in their innocence.

Very powerful in 8 words. My very best and a virtual six.
Sal :))


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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Amen. i totally agree.
Comment from Begin Again
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I do wonder how many people take the time to visit the grave of a loved one who has passed. When I am there, it seems as if fewer and fewer people are there. Maybe they grieve and honor the souls in different ways now days. The thought has crossed my mind if anyone will remember I was here.
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Yes. I do not expect any visitors after the hole is filled, and therefore I ask if being cremated and having my ashes feed the fish wouldn't be a better way.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Yes. I do not expect any visitors after the hole is filled, and therefore I ask if being cremated and having my ashes feed the fish wouldn't be a better way.
reply by Begin Again on 11-Sep-2024
    I know it sounds stupid because once I am dead the body is just an empty shell, but it gives me the creeps to think of my body being burned. Just a thought that jumps out and goes boo in my brain.
    Smiles, Carol