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Comment from jim vecchio
MANY CONGRATULATIONS ON THIS MILESTONE POST!!! I enjoyed this story and usually I can figure out your name references, but I have no idea who this Jim is. Once again, you won vengeance upon the guilty. Great work!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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MANY CONGRATULATIONS ON THIS MILESTONE POST!!! I enjoyed this story and usually I can figure out your name references, but I have no idea who this Jim is. Once again, you won vengeance upon the guilty. Great work!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Well, you can't get them all. My Mom was in a Women's softball team, as pitcher until she married.They won lots of awards. So, I could throw. Now, I don't know if i could get past my feet. When we are young, we accumalate memories so we can review them now. We are our own movie. Love to you and yours.Thanks for the kudos for my win. Karen
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I was never good at sports but my niece, who is my current POA, was an expert pitcher and got a scholarship, but my sister talked her out of it.
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Get a newspaper and whack her. A scholarship? turned down? Is she rich? Or jealous?
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She was following her mom's (my sister) advice who probably felt it was too risky a future.
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What is risky about a free education
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My family were all very conservative. My mother took fit when I tried to tell her I wanted to be a writer in New York.
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Home of heathens everywhere!
Karen
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Keep on writing!
Comment from Begin Again
Congratulations, Karen, on your 300th Milestone post. That's a lot of men to "knock off," but the good thing about it is that you haven't gotten caught. Old Walter was warned, so it's just a case of accidental poisoning. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Congratulations, Karen, on your 300th Milestone post. That's a lot of men to "knock off," but the good thing about it is that you haven't gotten caught. Old Walter was warned, so it's just a case of accidental poisoning. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thanks for the read and the congrats. Lately I don't want to anything but write and sleep. It's the change of weather. I hibernate.I wouldn't want her yard clean up! Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
If Waste resources, Senior housing, and Animal protection are proper nouns, they should be completely capitalized, like Animal Protection. If they are not, then don't capitalize anything.
Nice names for the dogs. You make your point with them.
And there you go again, writing about death. And people say MY writing is dark, lol!
Congratulations on 300 posts.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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If Waste resources, Senior housing, and Animal protection are proper nouns, they should be completely capitalized, like Animal Protection. If they are not, then don't capitalize anything.
Nice names for the dogs. You make your point with them.
And there you go again, writing about death. And people say MY writing is dark, lol!
Congratulations on 300 posts.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thanks for the edit. I have edited yours and others, and found one of my own. Well this one was supposed to be darkly clever and vicious, and it turned into Jerry Lewis.
Who is in charge here? Sometimes it does not feel like me!
I appreciate the time you take to edit me. You are a nice friend. Karen
Comment from tempeste
Thanks for the laugh Karen.
I can't stand those obnoxious neighbours that think they own the street.
They have no respect for anyone and allow their pets to destroy other people's property, dig holes , crap on the lawn, destroy vegetables patches etc.
Of course in reality one can't poison these jerks but I did enjoy Walter's demise.
I felt more for the dogs cause they didn't know any better, it was up to Walter to teach his dogs the rules.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thanks for the laugh Karen.
I can't stand those obnoxious neighbours that think they own the street.
They have no respect for anyone and allow their pets to destroy other people's property, dig holes , crap on the lawn, destroy vegetables patches etc.
Of course in reality one can't poison these jerks but I did enjoy Walter's demise.
I felt more for the dogs cause they didn't know any better, it was up to Walter to teach his dogs the rules.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Well, they knocked her down . It was supposed to be dark and moody and it turned into a comedy. It sometimes feels like I am not driving this bus. I appreciate you review, and I enjoy your telling me your opinions on what and how I write. All the edits I get, and storylines analyzed, give me new points of view to put into my new stories. Thanks for all your help. You are a sweetie pie. Karen
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Nice job on your 300th milestone post. Rat poion is a particularly nasty way to die but you did warn old Walter and he chose to be a nasty, greedy lump! Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Nice job on your 300th milestone post. Rat poion is a particularly nasty way to die but you did warn old Walter and he chose to be a nasty, greedy lump! Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Wow! That's a lot of writing. I warned him. But it was applejack pie. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from lyenochka
Congratulations on the 300th post. This one, like most of your works, involved killing off someone and this is a nasty neighbor and his nasty dogs. I'm hoping for more creative ways than rat poison. Perhaps tickling his funny bone to death?
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Congratulations on the 300th post. This one, like most of your works, involved killing off someone and this is a nasty neighbor and his nasty dogs. I'm hoping for more creative ways than rat poison. Perhaps tickling his funny bone to death?
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Rat poison was all she could buy. Thanks for the read; Wow 300! Karen
