Darkness of Desire
An eclipse haiku for the club12 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a very creative take on the "eclipse" event. It was lovely and formatted beautifully too. I liked that the light was swallowed. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I think this was a very creative take on the "eclipse" event. It was lovely and formatted beautifully too. I liked that the light was swallowed. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi June,
Nicely done haiku that meets the club prompt well. It shows the need for wishing for good in bd times.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I have a published book available on Amazon. It is called The Interloper (and other stories in prose and poetry) by Joan Pechter.
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Hi June,
Nicely done haiku that meets the club prompt well. It shows the need for wishing for good in bd times.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I have a published book available on Amazon. It is called The Interloper (and other stories in prose and poetry) by Joan Pechter.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
