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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Many of us have lived a nightmare. My first husband was an abuser. When I left him, I had to go into hiding. I do understand. Thank you for shairng.
nd he got my friend Craig to set me up. (friend, Greg)
When we got there I told him he could sleep on the couch. (there,)
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Many of us have lived a nightmare. My first husband was an abuser. When I left him, I had to go into hiding. I do understand. Thank you for shairng.
nd he got my friend Craig to set me up. (friend, Greg)
When we got there I told him he could sleep on the couch. (there,)
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Who is Greg? I will go edit thanks for the read. Karen
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LOL No clue, I think he decided he wanted to be part of your story. It should be (friend, Craig) LOL I hope Greg helped in you story.
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Made the edits. I don't know how they slip by. :-)
Comment from patcelaw
This is quite well written, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your sentence structure and your paragraphing are both very well done as well as your punctuation. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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This is quite well written, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. Your sentence structure and your paragraphing are both very well done as well as your punctuation. Patricia.
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Wow, It just got posted two seconds ago. It was rather bloody. Did the picture bother you? I put it there to warn folks off who were squeamish. Thanks for the read. Karen
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Your picture that you put with it did not bother me and the wording that you used did not bother me. I am not one that much likes horror, movies, or things that involve death and I have never really seen someone at the moment of their death, so I do not understand what happens with them.
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I was close to several who passed and they went quietly and at peace. Except for books, Tv, and movies I knwo nothing of death. Karen
