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The Colors of Fall

A contest entry

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Comment from Wendy G
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Beautiful image rich with beautiful Autumn colours! And a lovely Haiku to match it. You will be enjoying these colours as you now move into Fal. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving such a nice review.
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Your poem is beautiful with keen expression. Although Haiku typically would not use punctuation, your use of it is clever and not forceful and holds the connection quite well. Good luck in the contest
RJ

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
    Thank you for making the time to review my work and leaving a Nice review.
reply by RJ Heritage on 02-Sep-2024
    My pleasure
    RJ
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I love how your poem shares the colors of fall. The way you bring out the colors paints a beautiful picture of the season. It's a lovely reminder of the beauty that autumn brings. Great job!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work and leaving such a nice review.
Comment from royowen
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Oh yes, the colours of autumn are.pretty spectacular aren't they, I think they are particularly wonderful in your New England, where the pilgrim fathers landed, we were there on autumn, beautifully written Pat, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
    I am always grateful when I get such nice reviews. Thank you so
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    Welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Autumn is my favorite season for exactly the reasons you've listed in this entry. The rich colors, of course the cooler weather isn't bad either. LOL Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it when you live in the southwest desert of the United States and it is extremely hot all summer. Long autumn is a very special time for us when the temperature is cooled down.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Your poem is vibrant, exactly like the colours of autumn, and you have chosen an excellent image to illustrate the poem. Good luck in the contest. kay

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


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    Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I love the colors of fall. I love the scent of fall. The mix of rotting leaves and chimneys. Your Haiku has captured the elements that seem t distinguish fall from the other seasons. This was a beautiful poem. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time review reviewed by work and leaving such a nice comment.