Listen To My Voice
One person's feelings about getting back together19 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I love this, it must have come from a time of concern, everything we write tends to be from a personal experience, but you put it into a great rhyming aabb thyme, and a clever, articulate, expression, great flow and grammatical useage, well done Brenda, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
I love this, it must have come from a time of concern, everything we write tends to be from a personal experience, but you put it into a great rhyming aabb thyme, and a clever, articulate, expression, great flow and grammatical useage, well done Brenda, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Actually, it's right now. God is helping me through it. Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Brenda,
A lovely, cogent argument for a possible reconciliation.( We don't have a choice in anything, unless we have a voice).
I like the conditions you set forth: "my soul is longing to be free," and for once please listen to my voice., "we need to treat each other differently," all are cries to be heard.
The point I like best is that deception has no place in a solid relationship.
Excellent poem, Shirley.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
Brenda,
A lovely, cogent argument for a possible reconciliation.( We don't have a choice in anything, unless we have a voice).
I like the conditions you set forth: "my soul is longing to be free," and for once please listen to my voice., "we need to treat each other differently," all are cries to be heard.
The point I like best is that deception has no place in a solid relationship.
Excellent poem, Shirley.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Tell him to hit the road. I moved six hours away so he couldn't get to me. I changed my phone number, deleted him from my email, and phone. Do not make the same mistake all over again.
My opinion only. I know that poem by heart. Karen
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
Tell him to hit the road. I moved six hours away so he couldn't get to me. I changed my phone number, deleted him from my email, and phone. Do not make the same mistake all over again.
My opinion only. I know that poem by heart. Karen
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Hi Karen. Thank you for the caring review. We been together a long time. It is hard to let go
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Yes it sure is. The familiar, even if it is bad, is somehow more comforting then the unknown. I have taken a big leap here, and I hope it all works out. Karen
I wish you the best of luck in your nee life.
Comment from Begin Again
Sounds like she's talking to a wall because he isn't listening if she has to keep reminding him to hear what she has to say. Probably a good time to take her voice elsewhere with someone who might care. Great story in a poem. Thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
Sounds like she's talking to a wall because he isn't listening if she has to keep reminding him to hear what she has to say. Probably a good time to take her voice elsewhere with someone who might care. Great story in a poem. Thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you for very nice review
Comment from patcelaw
In this world today, there are so many who do not listen to others. They are so caught up in their own concerns that they forget that others have a voice and that voice needs to be heard. I enjoyed your poem, even though it's heartbreaking to know that there is those Times in life when marriages fall apart. Patricia.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
In this world today, there are so many who do not listen to others. They are so caught up in their own concerns that they forget that others have a voice and that voice needs to be heard. I enjoyed your poem, even though it's heartbreaking to know that there is those Times in life when marriages fall apart. Patricia.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well, the rhymes are spot on but the flow is rocky to be sure since you tried to fit into each line a whole bunch of words when less would do. Sometimes, less is more. Yet I get the picture of what you are trying to say. You need time to think about it before you go back to the relationship the way it was before.
Jesse
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
Well, the rhymes are spot on but the flow is rocky to be sure since you tried to fit into each line a whole bunch of words when less would do. Sometimes, less is more. Yet I get the picture of what you are trying to say. You need time to think about it before you go back to the relationship the way it was before.
Jesse
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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I know it is a little rocky. I keep practicing writing poems. Thank you Jesse, for your very thoughtful review. I'm separated right now from my husband. We have been together for 50 years
It is so hard to make a decision. We have been together for so long. but I don't want it to be like it was. Thanks for listening
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Oh my goodness! It must be hard after 50 years to try again to make it work.
I feel for you, my friend. Try again to make it work, you never know until you try again.
Enjoy the day.
Jesse
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It's complicated. Thank you for listening to me and your kind words, my friend.
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Yes, love and life are always complicated.
Take care, my friend.
Comment from Harry Craft
Wow! Great poem on a great subject! I really liked how you told your story in a poem. And such a difficult topic that so many people actually go through in life. Some don't want to admit and just live with it while others take action and try to correct it! Very good job! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
Wow! Great poem on a great subject! I really liked how you told your story in a poem. And such a difficult topic that so many people actually go through in life. Some don't want to admit and just live with it while others take action and try to correct it! Very good job! Best wishes!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your great review.
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You are so welcome!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Brenda,
This sounds like the man is hounding her to get back together. If she has to tell him to give her time to decide, then the decision should be not to try again and find someone who will let you be the you that you want to be.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
Hi Brenda,
This sounds like the man is hounding her to get back together. If she has to tell him to give her time to decide, then the decision should be not to try again and find someone who will let you be the you that you want to be.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your very nice review
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Don't mention it, Barbara.
Joan
Comment from Jacob1395
I could really feel the desire for this person to finally, at last, be heard. It made me think of someone stuck in a marriage they didn't want to be part of that they wanted to break free from. An excellent piece. I enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
I could really feel the desire for this person to finally, at last, be heard. It made me think of someone stuck in a marriage they didn't want to be part of that they wanted to break free from. An excellent piece. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your great review.