His Silence
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "His Silence - Chapter Ten"Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This has really heated up to something outstanding. I hope you can keep the tension at the same pitch in forthcoming chapters. I particularly liked the way you used short sentences and paragraphs to echo the punches Danielle swung-extremely effective. kay
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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This has really heated up to something outstanding. I hope you can keep the tension at the same pitch in forthcoming chapters. I particularly liked the way you used short sentences and paragraphs to echo the punches Danielle swung-extremely effective. kay
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you for the six stars. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Jacob, this is not a review but a question. What happened to "The Fix"? Am I the only one missing it? I have not begun to read this book because I thought you'd continue the other one; some of us were invested in it. You had another book - a sci fi - that I recall you only publish a handful of chapters for before it disappeared. I'm wondering if you do this intentionally - begin and get feedback, then complete the novel "off site"?
Just wondering.
Take care,
Pam
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Jacob, this is not a review but a question. What happened to "The Fix"? Am I the only one missing it? I have not begun to read this book because I thought you'd continue the other one; some of us were invested in it. You had another book - a sci fi - that I recall you only publish a handful of chapters for before it disappeared. I'm wondering if you do this intentionally - begin and get feedback, then complete the novel "off site"?
Just wondering.
Take care,
Pam
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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I am still continuing with The Fix, but also working on this one as well.
Comment from royowen
It must be a terrible burden to believe that you're brother killed your, if that's true, it's completely wrong, and goes against every possible laws I can't think, but if there is a legitimate reason, well that's a different, but I suspect, there's something small in Denmark, beautifully written Jacob, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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It must be a terrible burden to believe that you're brother killed your, if that's true, it's completely wrong, and goes against every possible laws I can't think, but if there is a legitimate reason, well that's a different, but I suspect, there's something small in Denmark, beautifully written Jacob, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you Roy, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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Most welcome
Comment from BethShelby
So we don't get the answers here. There is more to learn. I don't know how I expected this meeting to go, but this wasn't it. I guess Jeremiah doesn't blame Harvey for what he did, and he understands why he did it. It seems he could have at least told Danielle why he couldn't see her until now.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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So we don't get the answers here. There is more to learn. I don't know how I expected this meeting to go, but this wasn't it. I guess Jeremiah doesn't blame Harvey for what he did, and he understands why he did it. It seems he could have at least told Danielle why he couldn't see her until now.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. There is still quite a way to go yet.