2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from RJ Heritage
Seems like botn sky and waves are at different and perhaps opposite sides of the issue. I think like with us, humans, their c ability to survive might lie in their willingness to come together. Great entry, good luck in the contest.
RJ
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Seems like botn sky and waves are at different and perhaps opposite sides of the issue. I think like with us, humans, their c ability to survive might lie in their willingness to come together. Great entry, good luck in the contest.
RJ
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, I like the "grateful windy waves" I can just see the waves of the grain in the thirsty ground lapping up the life-giving water from the weeping sky. Great job with this one!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Oh, I like the "grateful windy waves" I can just see the waves of the grain in the thirsty ground lapping up the life-giving water from the weeping sky. Great job with this one!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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You always get the meaning of my poems 😊
Thank you very much, big sister
Love
Marival ❤️
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Delightful imagery of the sky weeping and the wind blowing with the recipient, passive dried fields in the middle. Well done, Gypsy, and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Delightful imagery of the sky weeping and the wind blowing with the recipient, passive dried fields in the middle. Well done, Gypsy, and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie 😊
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
No more rain please, we are having a welcome dry spell. I enjoyed your ambient write about the sky weeping and the fields giving thanks for the nourishment, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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No more rain please, we are having a welcome dry spell. I enjoyed your ambient write about the sky weeping and the fields giving thanks for the nourishment, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, dolly
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is very well written and with an excellent message. Your descriptive words and presentation work well together, also. Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes!
Alexan :)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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This is very well written and with an excellent message. Your descriptive words and presentation work well together, also. Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes!
Alexan :)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Alexan. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
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Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a great 8-word poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from the artwork you chose. The title went well with your words also. Maybe one day I will keep reviewing your work and figure it all out! Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Gypsy, This is a great 8-word poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from the artwork you chose. The title went well with your words also. Maybe one day I will keep reviewing your work and figure it all out! Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, teri
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Comment from royowen
We've had a few droughts in Australia in recent years, the years and the weather has been unkind to people, but also extreme floods, a dry field devoid of water can be a very grateful recipient, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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We've had a few droughts in Australia in recent years, the years and the weather has been unkind to people, but also extreme floods, a dry field devoid of water can be a very grateful recipient, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy
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Welcome Gypsy
Comment from mermaids
I like how each line is a different color. Your use of words captures nature in action. The dry fields need her weeping to survive and replenish. Excellent nature poem that creates a clear picture.
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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I like how each line is a different color. Your use of words captures nature in action. The dry fields need her weeping to survive and replenish. Excellent nature poem that creates a clear picture.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, mermaids
Gypsy