2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Beautifully atmospheric as the sailboat leaving shore becomes the imagery of sleep while the arrival at dawn bringing the sun marks the awakening and start of a new day. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Beautifully atmospheric as the sailboat leaving shore becomes the imagery of sleep while the arrival at dawn bringing the sun marks the awakening and start of a new day. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from mermaids
I like the image and feelings that come forth in your words. There is a light dreamy feeling that the sailboat brings. I like how the sailboat leaves at night and returns in the morning.
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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I like the image and feelings that come forth in your words. There is a light dreamy feeling that the sailboat brings. I like how the sailboat leaves at night and returns in the morning.
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy