Alleyway To Love.
Co-incidence has a lot to do with love.16 total reviews
Comment from BOO ghost
BOO is reading.,,"Good idea. Allow me to shout. A window seat at McDonald's is the best I can do." I would lose this cheap skate!
They both laughed and joined hands. Tina had a good feeling about this man. Their alleyway meeting was meant to be. Hum. An alleyway and McDonald's is a good omen? Guess I need to read on to see if this loverboy fulfills her dreams...
BOO!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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BOO is reading.,,"Good idea. Allow me to shout. A window seat at McDonald's is the best I can do." I would lose this cheap skate!
They both laughed and joined hands. Tina had a good feeling about this man. Their alleyway meeting was meant to be. Hum. An alleyway and McDonald's is a good omen? Guess I need to read on to see if this loverboy fulfills her dreams...
BOO!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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LOL. Yes, perhaps Tina needs to aim higher. Perhaps she caught him out and upsized the meal.
Thanks for your review. Take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from royowen
What a good plot, I immediately thought of that book title, made into a film, 'The best laid plans Of mice and men' we really are poor predictors of the future, we depend on 'experts' to tell us, I loved this 'chance' happening, well done Barry, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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What a good plot, I immediately thought of that book title, made into a film, 'The best laid plans Of mice and men' we really are poor predictors of the future, we depend on 'experts' to tell us, I loved this 'chance' happening, well done Barry, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thanks Roy, for your kind review. Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, chance plays a role in all of our lives. Some more, some less. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry
Comment from patcelaw
It was a pleasure to listen to. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a wonderful weekend. May God bless you and may you continue to write for a fan story. Patricia.O
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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It was a pleasure to listen to. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a wonderful weekend. May God bless you and may you continue to write for a fan story. Patricia.O
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Patricia,
Thanks for your kind review. Glad you enjoyed the story. You to have a wonderful weekend and I intend to keep writing for the fan story site for many years. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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And for short days, I will have been on fan story for 10 years and I have written close to 3500 posts in that time.
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Wow. Well done. An average of some 350 posts a year. Very prolific. I am afraid I am nowhere near that level at the moment. Keep safe and keep writing
Comment from Jacob1395
You have definitely left me wondering how their relationship develops after this first date. I thought you told this in quite an original way and I thought you did an excellent job with the dialogue which sounded natural and was really well written. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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You have definitely left me wondering how their relationship develops after this first date. I thought you told this in quite an original way and I thought you did an excellent job with the dialogue which sounded natural and was really well written. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Jacob,
Thanks for taking the time to review my story. Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, you never know how they went with their new found love. there could be a follow-up. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I loved the way your story blends tension with humor. The character are so real. Especially the way Tina and Tim's initial apprehension shifts into something surprisingly warm and hopeful. Great job bringing this alleyway rendezvous to life!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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I loved the way your story blends tension with humor. The character are so real. Especially the way Tina and Tim's initial apprehension shifts into something surprisingly warm and hopeful. Great job bringing this alleyway rendezvous to life!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Michael,
Thanks for your great review. So glad you enjoyed the story. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from zanya
It;s a great tale of a potential love encounter- refreshing to read, instead of some of the more 'phoney' ! love stories that proliferate these days- thanks for keeeping our feet on the ground!
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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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It;s a great tale of a potential love encounter- refreshing to read, instead of some of the more 'phoney' ! love stories that proliferate these days- thanks for keeeping our feet on the ground!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much for your kind review. I like your description of it as being a tale of potential love encounter. So true. Glad you enjoyed the read. Have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
