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Comment from Neonewman
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This is a beautifully crafted, tantalizing piece you have delivered, Gypsy. I would expect nothing less. Thank you for sharing your extraordinary talent, my friend.
God bless,
Steve

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 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Steve

    Gypsy 😊
reply by Neonewman on 05-Aug-2024
    My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This gogyohka, Tangerine Break of Dawn, captures the ambiance of the surroundings that greet the waking lovers and help strengthen the feelings as they wake.

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 Comment Written 05-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 05-Aug-2024
    Thank you very much, Bill

    Gypsy 😊