Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Author, I really like your light,straightforward take on poetry.
Nice rhyme scheme.
Clever words.
This poem made me smile.
I thought of myself with glass of wine in hand. Maybe my poems would be much better! ( lol or not).
Excellent poem,
Best wishes, Bill.
Cindy

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024

Thank you, Cindy

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is Fun to listen to. I wish you the very best in the contest and I wish you a very good weekend. May God bless you and may you continue to write such beautiful things. Patricia.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024

Thanks again, Patricia

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

It would be a CRIME if I didn't review this and to do it honor I will dress up like a MIME and gesture my review! It may go overTIME so don't WHINE.
Thanks for sharing this wonder.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024

Thanks, Marilyn

Comment from gansach

Excellent

What a great rhythm this poem has~I kind of galloped right through it and felt the need to read it aloud. It's a very good entry for the Rhyming poem competition. Nice job, Bill!

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 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024

That is cool to hear. Thank you.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Sometimes words sound the same
So we play a sounding game
Hoping no one will blame
Us for sounding lame
Or lay on us the blame
For words to tough to tame.

Or something.

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 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024

Rhyme is a gimmick, Jimmick.

reply by jim vecchio on 26-Jul-2024

Oh, so?