Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from karenina
Oh, boy. Nick should have talked when he had the choice...
Margaret, on the other hand, can't seem to keep her mouth shut!
You may have a glitch with this sentence:
"Dylan, where exactly didn't see these paintings?"
And "Evil Eddie" left some unwanted characters near the end...
(Sidenote: I love it when Garth whips his FBI badge out!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Oh, boy. Nick should have talked when he had the choice...
Margaret, on the other hand, can't seem to keep her mouth shut!
You may have a glitch with this sentence:
"Dylan, where exactly didn't see these paintings?"
And "Evil Eddie" left some unwanted characters near the end...
(Sidenote: I love it when Garth whips his FBI badge out!)
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Gotta love our cowboy! I think Garth and Eleanor is why my blood is flowing like crazy and I'm whipping out these chapters to get caught up. Losing five days is tough! But never fear...the mighty cape writes again! LOL
Smiles, CArol
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I know better than to EVER doubt you!
Comment from Wendy G
Margaret is giving herself and her trysts with the judge away, step by step. Yes, the paintings were quickly smuggled out. I am assuming Nick's cell was left unlocked on purpose? The judge will is conveniently away, but will definitely have a lot to answer for. Thanks for the info about Peter, who has also compromised himself. All very complicated. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Margaret is giving herself and her trysts with the judge away, step by step. Yes, the paintings were quickly smuggled out. I am assuming Nick's cell was left unlocked on purpose? The judge will is conveniently away, but will definitely have a lot to answer for. Thanks for the info about Peter, who has also compromised himself. All very complicated. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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the judge always has a cover story for himself and gets others to do his dirty work. Glad you are enjoying and thanks for the lovely review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, you said you thought your last story was your best ever, and it was certainly great. But I have to say for my tastes, this one is even better. Outstanding! Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Well, you said you thought your last story was your best ever, and it was certainly great. But I have to say for my tastes, this one is even better. Outstanding! Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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I have to agre with you! I am really enjoying writing this one. I love the mystery and crime but it's fun to add a little spice with Eleanor. Thank you so much for stopping by and living me a smile.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A chapter full of action but seemingly no closer to Megan's whereabouts. Meanwhile, Nick's had a battering and, with the system down, no footage to identify the culprits so a frustrating time all round for Donatelli.
Some edits perhaps
Dylan where exactly didn't see these paintings? (Where exactly (did you) see the paintings?
para starting: Donatelli had already surmised... perhaps some punctuation between the first and second sentence to help with the syntax?
And in your characters list - Charles Weldon - a (renowned) artist
But, as with all your writing, Carol, this has an excellent and professional feel to it and I can appreciate all the work involved in this complex crime mystery with all the characters involved. Well done! Debbie
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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A chapter full of action but seemingly no closer to Megan's whereabouts. Meanwhile, Nick's had a battering and, with the system down, no footage to identify the culprits so a frustrating time all round for Donatelli.
Some edits perhaps
Dylan where exactly didn't see these paintings? (Where exactly (did you) see the paintings?
para starting: Donatelli had already surmised... perhaps some punctuation between the first and second sentence to help with the syntax?
And in your characters list - Charles Weldon - a (renowned) artist
But, as with all your writing, Carol, this has an excellent and professional feel to it and I can appreciate all the work involved in this complex crime mystery with all the characters involved. Well done! Debbie
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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thanks so much Debbie for the review, the support, and catching my goofs. Trying to catch up after five days is a bummer and I need all the help I can get. Glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks again!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Nick is paying for his part in the kidnapping. He hasn't talked and likely will be afraid if he does it will mean his like. Already it sound like he may not make it. You are doing a great job on this. I'll see if I have a six left
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Nick is paying for his part in the kidnapping. He hasn't talked and likely will be afraid if he does it will mean his like. Already it sound like he may not make it. You are doing a great job on this. I'll see if I have a six left
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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thanks so much for the beautiful strs and all your encouraging thoughts. I am thrilled that you are enjoying the story. I know I am. And thanks to Mother Nature, I must write faster and longer.
Smiles, Carol