Unfinished Brushstrokes
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Comment from BethShelby
Eleanor isn't hesitant about appearing to everyone. If all dead people could do that so easily then everyone would believe in ghosts and not be surprised to see them. lol I knows she isn't really going to let the thief get away with a million dollars and I sure Judge Doyle will be going down. I'm glad you got you lights back. I've missed your story.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Eleanor isn't hesitant about appearing to everyone. If all dead people could do that so easily then everyone would believe in ghosts and not be surprised to see them. lol I knows she isn't really going to let the thief get away with a million dollars and I sure Judge Doyle will be going down. I'm glad you got you lights back. I've missed your story.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Beth! I am so very glad that the power is back! And now I have a lot of catching up to do...write, read,review and write....Eleanor is trying to make up for the things they lost when she was alive. She knows here time is short but she hopes she can make the best of it. Thanks for the review. Take care!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
With Eleanor reaching out to her family members, they are changing quickly, and that's so wonderful, because Eleanor can help them in death far more than in the flesh so to speak, she appears to Margaret and assures her of success concerning Megan, oh and of course Donatelli, well done Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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With Eleanor reaching out to her family members, they are changing quickly, and that's so wonderful, because Eleanor can help them in death far more than in the flesh so to speak, she appears to Margaret and assures her of success concerning Megan, oh and of course Donatelli, well done Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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thanks Roy. I don't know if it's possible but sometimes I think loved ones return. Just when I am about to give up, a cardinal appears outside my door or a butterfly flutters her winds... a simple reminder that I am not alone. Then I am blessed.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Great chapter! I'd be giving you six stars for creating a ghost that delivers coffee on demand (smile) but this flowed beautifully and besides, you made it through five days without power!
Welcome back! I missed you!
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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Great chapter! I'd be giving you six stars for creating a ghost that delivers coffee on demand (smile) but this flowed beautifully and besides, you made it through five days without power!
Welcome back! I missed you!
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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And now I know I am truly addicted to FS and writing. Fifteen minutes after the power was on, I was at the computer typing and reading furiously to catch up. And now at 4 AM, here I am again. (And your shining stars make me bright eyed and bush tailed) LOL
Yes...morning coffee from my Keurig today!!! Life is good! I missed you too!
Thank you so much!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Thank goodness for muses and caffeine!
Comment from lyenochka
Love that Eleanor is able to use her ghost-status magic to set things right for her family and even get the detective on board to do what he needs to do to solve the crimes. I like the humor of even ending with a "Boo!"
Speaking of "Boo" - check out the writings of BOO Ghost. He returns reviews and I'm sure he'd like this story!
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Love that Eleanor is able to use her ghost-status magic to set things right for her family and even get the detective on board to do what he needs to do to solve the crimes. I like the humor of even ending with a "Boo!"
Speaking of "Boo" - check out the writings of BOO Ghost. He returns reviews and I'm sure he'd like this story!
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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I am loving Eleanor and the fact that she is able to bring her family together even if she has to do it as a ghost. Thanks so much, Helen.
And I will go and find Boo Ghost.
Smiles, Carol
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This ghost story feels much happier over all. 💖
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Carol. How the heck are you?
I like the ending where she said boo after promising not to
I'm not so sure that Jonathan didn't take the money or kidnap Megan or hire someone else to do it
On the other hand, I don't think Trevor stole anything, but if Jonathan had given him the necklace to pawn he would've done it
Trevor wasn't in this chapter very much. I guess Judge Doyle is leaving him alone. That judge who is as crooked as can be also got a small mention in this chapter
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Hi, Carol. How the heck are you?
I like the ending where she said boo after promising not to
I'm not so sure that Jonathan didn't take the money or kidnap Megan or hire someone else to do it
On the other hand, I don't think Trevor stole anything, but if Jonathan had given him the necklace to pawn he would've done it
Trevor wasn't in this chapter very much. I guess Judge Doyle is leaving him alone. That judge who is as crooked as can be also got a small mention in this chapter
I enjoyed reading your book chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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Hi there! I am far better now that I am able to be back on FS, Mother Nature was not nice and I hate no power and water for five days. But here I am and fighting to get back on track. Thanks for loving the story and for the generous stars. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
A fine mix of high drama and humorous interactions with Eleanor, who has quite the sense of humour. The trouble is, when everyone (or almost everyone) has secrets and life problems there are very few who don't have an ulterior motive behind all their words and actions. Let's hope Donatelli acts swiftly. An absorbing chapter. Well done.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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A fine mix of high drama and humorous interactions with Eleanor, who has quite the sense of humour. The trouble is, when everyone (or almost everyone) has secrets and life problems there are very few who don't have an ulterior motive behind all their words and actions. Let's hope Donatelli acts swiftly. An absorbing chapter. Well done.
Wendy
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2024
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After missing in action, it feels good to get wrapped up in the story again though I hope I can finish it in time. We will see. I am glad that you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks!
Smiles, Carol