Bubba's Last Blast
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Laughter Flash writing prompt. A very humorous flash story that meets the 50 word criteria. The artwork adds to the presentation. The twist at the end of the story sells it. Good job.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the Laughter Flash writing prompt. A very humorous flash story that meets the 50 word criteria. The artwork adds to the presentation. The twist at the end of the story sells it. Good job.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your kind and complimentary comments.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The entry here is a lark and enhanced even more than the perfectly dynamic picture accompanying it. Well done and good luck
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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The entry here is a lark and enhanced even more than the perfectly dynamic picture accompanying it. Well done and good luck
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review. The picture begged for a story. It was great fun writing it. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Hahaha! Bubba's invention allowed him to spread himself thin, all over the place. You told the story of Bubba's major accomplishment in life, using humorous, succinct language. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Hahaha! Bubba's invention allowed him to spread himself thin, all over the place. You told the story of Bubba's major accomplishment in life, using humorous, succinct language. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much! Your review was a funny as my story! I wish I had thought of your "spreading himself thin" comments...I would have incorporated them in the story. Thanks again.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This piece is so cute. I love it! I'm not very good at flash fiction, so kudos to you! Thank you for sharing this with all of us and happy writing!
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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This piece is so cute. I love it! I'm not very good at flash fiction, so kudos to you! Thank you for sharing this with all of us and happy writing!
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Lindsey. I'm not very good at this either, but it just popped in my brain and was a fun write. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I did not know that! How interesting! haha. This was a darkly humorous tale! I think you've done a great job of writing a poem for this contest. It was so funny.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I did not know that! How interesting! haha. This was a darkly humorous tale! I think you've done a great job of writing a poem for this contest. It was so funny.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Michael. This was a fun write. I appreciate your complimentary review.
