Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Wow, what a spooky story! You really captured teenage camaraderie and the unexpected twists that can turn a fun evening into a horror night. The descriptions of the basement setting and the tension with the Ouija board kept me on edge. This was such an enjoyable read.

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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Lindsey Russell

Excellent

This is a great short story. Thank you for sharing it! One suggestion: Maybe change the font style. It was a bit difficult for me to read. Good job and good luck!

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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024

Thank you so much!

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Exceptional

-Great story and I loved the notes about the owls that have haunted you since.
Oiuja boards can be scary, and you've certainly built up the scariness in this one. I'd like to read more. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024

Thank you so much for your review and the extra star. Much appreciated!