Seven Sane Sailors
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I couldn't help but smile and laugh at this writing prompt entry. The alliteration was wonderful and of course, I had to attempt to read it out loud. I had a lot of fun with this. I hope you did writing it.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I couldn't help but smile and laugh at this writing prompt entry. The alliteration was wonderful and of course, I had to attempt to read it out loud. I had a lot of fun with this. I hope you did writing it.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I don't know how you do it but this is an excellent fulfilment of the prompt. Your story is readable and, bar a few bumps along the way (put down to the storm:)), is all pretty fluent. It's also well-structured with an excellent ending and impressive imagery: Storm shadows.... Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I don't know how you do it but this is an excellent fulfilment of the prompt. Your story is readable and, bar a few bumps along the way (put down to the storm:)), is all pretty fluent. It's also well-structured with an excellent ending and impressive imagery: Storm shadows.... Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
wow! I am just blown away by your ability to take this writing prompt, with its advanced difficulty, and not only do the challenge but do it in complete story form with paragraphs and dialogue! Very well done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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wow! I am just blown away by your ability to take this writing prompt, with its advanced difficulty, and not only do the challenge but do it in complete story form with paragraphs and dialogue! Very well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you! :)
Xo
Comment from jessizero
This was definitely one of the better "stuck on one letter" entries I've read. It actually made sense! Also, you can't go wrong with sushi. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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This was definitely one of the better "stuck on one letter" entries I've read. It actually made sense! Also, you can't go wrong with sushi. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Jessi!
Xo
Comment from Nina Sexton
Excellent work! You have a captivating story here with several characters you managed to develop with just the letter S. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Excellent work! You have a captivating story here with several characters you managed to develop with just the letter S. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Nina, I am thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Seven Sane Sailors, written entirely with S-words, tells an amazing tale of the ship of seamen encountering and dismembering an apparently delicious sea monster. I guess the word got around and now sea serpents are rare. Owe you a six.
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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This story, Seven Sane Sailors, written entirely with S-words, tells an amazing tale of the ship of seamen encountering and dismembering an apparently delicious sea monster. I guess the word got around and now sea serpents are rare. Owe you a six.
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Haha! Thanks so much, Bill!
Xo
Comment from Sally Law
Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious in S! Sally says slamming short shall sink aforeSaid seafaring ships! Sending super Sally stars, seafarer, seashells, and sunny sailor's smiles.
Sally by the Sea :))
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious in S! Sally says slamming short shall sink aforeSaid seafaring ships! Sending super Sally stars, seafarer, seashells, and sunny sailor's smiles.
Sally by the Sea :))
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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<3 Sending sincere smiles, sweet sally! :) :) :)
Xoxo
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Sooo sweet and so glad you won! Sal :)) Xoxo
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon,
This has 'winner' written all over it. This is an excellent response to the brief. It is a comprehensive story despite the limitations of vocabulary.
(Although I think 'scoffed' rather than 'scarfed'?)
As I say, this one should do it - but whether it does or not, I think this is a great effort. Well done.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Hello Anon,
This has 'winner' written all over it. This is an excellent response to the brief. It is a comprehensive story despite the limitations of vocabulary.
(Although I think 'scoffed' rather than 'scarfed'?)
As I say, this one should do it - but whether it does or not, I think this is a great effort. Well done.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Phill!
Xo
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Ah Jessica. I am so pleased to fidn out that it was you! Well done.
I did a similar exercise some years back (Short Story "S") and I really do appreciate how focused you need to stay to make it work as a story.
Again, well done...I am pleased you were recognised in the contest.
cheers
phill
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That means the world, Phill, thank you!! Xo