The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Carol, I'm sorry I haven't been more present for this wonderful story! I love the idea of the ghosts communicating with the characters and the poignancy and otherworldliness that are evoked. A blending of dreams with reality. The hunt for the sword concludes your chapter as it started with a sense of satisfaction that everything has been rightfully resolved. Thanks for sharing, Carol. Debbie
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Carol, I'm sorry I haven't been more present for this wonderful story! I love the idea of the ghosts communicating with the characters and the poignancy and otherworldliness that are evoked. A blending of dreams with reality. The hunt for the sword concludes your chapter as it started with a sense of satisfaction that everything has been rightfully resolved. Thanks for sharing, Carol. Debbie
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I am happy when you stop by to check on my efforts and find them entertaining and fun to read. Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
What a great finish you've had to this great story, I think judging by what I've read you have at least a novella dear friend, and may the Lord grant you success, I mean after all the theme's major thrust is love and forgiveness which is what we all long for, bless you, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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What a great finish you've had to this great story, I think judging by what I've read you have at least a novella dear friend, and may the Lord grant you success, I mean after all the theme's major thrust is love and forgiveness which is what we all long for, bless you, blessings Roy
Typo : love pouring from his (eyes)
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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thanks so much Roy for following the story and enjoying it. I will miss these ghosts when it comes to an end. Maybe this will be the one I publish... my first.
Smiles, Carol
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