In a Shabby Room
A bouquet haiku for the club15 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a great piece of haiku. You got the syllable count right for a traditional haiku, and your message was sweet and happy. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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This was a great piece of haiku. You got the syllable count right for a traditional haiku, and your message was sweet and happy. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
My guess is any picked flowers are a joy to behold. The bewilderment of children doing the same is special.
Nice overall presentation for this club contest.
Mark
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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June,
My guess is any picked flowers are a joy to behold. The bewilderment of children doing the same is special.
Nice overall presentation for this club contest.
Mark
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem paints a tender scene of innocence. The imagery of daisies picked by a child's hands and joy contained in a glass jar captures a moment of happiness so well. I love the way your poem makes me feel. There is such warmth in your words and a reminder of the beauty found in small, everyday moments.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Your poem paints a tender scene of innocence. The imagery of daisies picked by a child's hands and joy contained in a glass jar captures a moment of happiness so well. I love the way your poem makes me feel. There is such warmth in your words and a reminder of the beauty found in small, everyday moments.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
Comment from royowen
Whenever a child is mentioned in less than salubrious place, they seem to add a beauty at the mention of their name, this is beautifully written my friend June,,beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Whenever a child is mentioned in less than salubrious place, they seem to add a beauty at the mention of their name, this is beautifully written my friend June,,beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, In a Shabby Room, has the proper formatting and depicts the humble attributes of this home as astounding, seeing the love manifesting within a humble vase with love-picked flowers. Nice.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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This 5-7-5, In a Shabby Room, has the proper formatting and depicts the humble attributes of this home as astounding, seeing the love manifesting within a humble vase with love-picked flowers. Nice.
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
