The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love it!! I love the way Tony and Terrence are always in trouble, and they are the least likely to cause it. This are going to 'hot' up (LOL) soon, and they'll curse the fact that they didn't leave when they first saw the sticks flying through the air. Brilliant chapter, my friend. Well done! Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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I love it!! I love the way Tony and Terrence are always in trouble, and they are the least likely to cause it. This are going to 'hot' up (LOL) soon, and they'll curse the fact that they didn't leave when they first saw the sticks flying through the air. Brilliant chapter, my friend. Well done! Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Hello, Sandra...Thank you so much for the six and the awesome praise. Poor Terrence and Tony are in for a few more scares I think, but in the end, I think they will be alright. Thanks for enjoying the ride!
Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
A lot is happening in this post. I can't wait to see all of these plans work out and redemption is achieved. I really do like this story and am going to be sorry to see it end. I'll miss my friends, but not as much as I miss Garth.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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A lot is happening in this post. I can't wait to see all of these plans work out and redemption is achieved. I really do like this story and am going to be sorry to see it end. I'll miss my friends, but not as much as I miss Garth.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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How come I new that last remark was coming? LOL I'm going to hate to see these guys go as well...I hated writing the story in the beginning and now it has become my favorite. I'm thrilled that you have been enjoying it as well. Sorry there just didn't seem to be a place for our Cowboy to ride in for the rescue. Thanks as always!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Somehow, I couldn't picture Garth with ghosts, either. Just isn't his thing.
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No, he'd probably have to challenge them to a duel and then Tango would want his turn too! lol
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So true.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
In Chapter 40, the narrative takes a significant turn as Louie and his crew discover the hidden treasure, reigniting their hopes of immense wealth. Terrence and Tony's pride shines through as they bask in Louie's approval, despite Marcos's lingering doubts.
The chapter ends with the spirits diligently preparing for the impending confrontation, their spectral efforts blending humor and determination.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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In Chapter 40, the narrative takes a significant turn as Louie and his crew discover the hidden treasure, reigniting their hopes of immense wealth. Terrence and Tony's pride shines through as they bask in Louie's approval, despite Marcos's lingering doubts.
The chapter ends with the spirits diligently preparing for the impending confrontation, their spectral efforts blending humor and determination.
Excellent.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Oh you made my heart sing..... As the book winds down, I fear that there isn't enough of the ghoulish stuff to please people, but my intentions were never to write a ghost story. The story took hold of me and took me to places I've never been....it's been quite the ride. Thank you so much for your outstanding praise and the stars. I am beyond thrilled.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
