Do Not Enter
Aboriginal woman goes for help.12 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This story poem was well executed and told the story of women being raped and men murdered. I was shocked to read the gory details of how the men in the street laughed and drank alcohol in defiance of the great-grandmother of the indigenous tribe.
Thanks for sharing. I am stronger for the telling and believe you in all your earnest truth that they are treated badly regardless of their ways.
Jesse
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This story poem was well executed and told the story of women being raped and men murdered. I was shocked to read the gory details of how the men in the street laughed and drank alcohol in defiance of the great-grandmother of the indigenous tribe.
Thanks for sharing. I am stronger for the telling and believe you in all your earnest truth that they are treated badly regardless of their ways.
Jesse
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hello Jesse, This goes on today. Same as America. The British stole Australia and the Americans stole the Africans and the British stole Australia and murdered our people. Thanks for reading friend. Kay xx
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Yep! Same as it ever was. History repeats itself over and over again.
I wish we would learn.
Take care, my friend.
Jesse
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Jesse, It's too late. We are in the last days. I don't pity those who turn their back on God. K xx
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We are here to learn otherwise we have to learn it again at our real home. People need to clean house with bad Karma. K xx
Comment from Dr. Nad
Thanks for sharing your poem that highlights the human struggle that some cultures are continuing to endure even today. Thankfully actions like this are not readily condoned in modern culture, however there are areas around the world that have not caught up to present day standards of decorum. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. You have employed a literary style that I am unfamiliar with.
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thanks for sharing your poem that highlights the human struggle that some cultures are continuing to endure even today. Thankfully actions like this are not readily condoned in modern culture, however there are areas around the world that have not caught up to present day standards of decorum. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. You have employed a literary style that I am unfamiliar with.
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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G'Day Dr. Nad. This was fiction based on fact and still it goes on today. Many blacks have died in custody. The young blacks are making their mark with their painting and dancing in white man's land.
We are the 1st Nation and it is our land. The British took Australia in 1788, not unlike America stealing Africans for slavery. Thanks for reading. K xx
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You are most welcome my friend.