The Night We Met
5-7-5 Love Poem18 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice! A good choice of image to support your thoughts. Spring rain is warm, gentle productive and has good outcomes. Well said. Best wishes.
Wendy
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Very nice! A good choice of image to support your thoughts. Spring rain is warm, gentle productive and has good outcomes. Well said. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery sets the scene and mood
with roaring thunder and stormy skies.
-A good concluding line that also includes a
good contrast to the stormy skies.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Good artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery sets the scene and mood
with roaring thunder and stormy skies.
-A good concluding line that also includes a
good contrast to the stormy skies.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
Comment from Ulla
Aw, how romantic is that. You certainly fell loud spring rain, spring rain being a synonym for innocent love. How sweet this poem is. All the best of luck. Ulla,:)))
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Aw, how romantic is that. You certainly fell loud spring rain, spring rain being a synonym for innocent love. How sweet this poem is. All the best of luck. Ulla,:)))
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
This is quite strong overall. Good job using the limited amount of words to convey a strong message. I also enjoy the graphic that you added to this!!
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This is quite strong overall. Good job using the limited amount of words to convey a strong message. I also enjoy the graphic that you added to this!!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
Comment from Sally Law
Most romantic one of the bunch, mystery poet. Beautifully written and illustrated in short verse 5-7-5 love poetry. Sending you my best today as always and my good wishes in the vote.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Most romantic one of the bunch, mystery poet. Beautifully written and illustrated in short verse 5-7-5 love poetry. Sending you my best today as always and my good wishes in the vote.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, my Sally!
Xo
Jess
Comment from kahpot
How very clever, I like the play on "stood and fell" as they fell in love beneath the rain, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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How very clever, I like the play on "stood and fell" as they fell in love beneath the rain, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Douglas Goff
These shorty Haiku are hard to review sometimes, but this one packed quite a frisky punch. Seems like some boots are getting knocked!
Good luck in the competition!
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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These shorty Haiku are hard to review sometimes, but this one packed quite a frisky punch. Seems like some boots are getting knocked!
Good luck in the competition!
D
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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lol Right, you are! Thank you so much, Douglas.
Xo
Jess
Comment from royowen
I can see the mystery metaphor, very clever, of course when the passions of two people overflow, then who knows where it will lead. A great entry in this contest, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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I can see the mystery metaphor, very clever, of course when the passions of two people overflow, then who knows where it will lead. A great entry in this contest, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Xo
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