2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from lyenochka
A neat ekhphrastic type of poem. It's a poetic scene with a shepherd and his sheep. I like the mantle of dawn that probably feels pretty cold but his love for the sheep keeps him there. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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A neat ekhphrastic type of poem. It's a poetic scene with a shepherd and his sheep. I like the mantle of dawn that probably feels pretty cold but his love for the sheep keeps him there. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. First I had a cold night but I couldn't find a picture that fit well. Mornings can be cold too.
Love,
Marival.
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