Willing Hearts
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Comment from lancellot
With that bra scene, I'm assuming Sami is also a woman who has been sheltered growing up and therefore is a virgin with little to no experience around men.
The cast is still all nice, good people. Odd for government workers/ law enforcement but...
The writing and editing are solid. I would wonder about the pacing and engagement factor of the story, but if you and your fans approve of this style then it is the right one.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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With that bra scene, I'm assuming Sami is also a woman who has been sheltered growing up and therefore is a virgin with little to no experience around men.
The cast is still all nice, good people. Odd for government workers/ law enforcement but...
The writing and editing are solid. I would wonder about the pacing and engagement factor of the story, but if you and your fans approve of this style then it is the right one.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Sami is not a virgin. More will come out later. Plus, earlier I said she spent the weekends with Marc. HMMM!!! The bra scene has nothing to do with innocence or sheltered but with the perceived stringent rules of Noah. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
Noah seems to be going back and forth between trying to stay aloof from Sami, and then trying to get closer to him. He talks about the decorum of his job, and then he ends up hugging her back anyway. Chemistry is hard to ignore. estory
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Noah seems to be going back and forth between trying to stay aloof from Sami, and then trying to get closer to him. He talks about the decorum of his job, and then he ends up hugging her back anyway. Chemistry is hard to ignore. estory
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Chemistry is hard to ignore. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
There's a familiarity happening now, but certainly not very much, I love the conversation, and I don't think Novak is much of a conversationalist, and the pair of them are battling their way through a gambit of emotions, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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There's a familiarity happening now, but certainly not very much, I love the conversation, and I don't think Novak is much of a conversationalist, and the pair of them are battling their way through a gambit of emotions, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Noah struggles with talking, especially about feelings. Thank you for the kind review.
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I can see that
Comment from Ben Colder
Noah and his intentions are coming to the top of things. Blackberries cobble and Ice cream. Wow! what a treat. Hope you are having a great vacation. Good one, Barb.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Noah and his intentions are coming to the top of things. Blackberries cobble and Ice cream. Wow! what a treat. Hope you are having a great vacation. Good one, Barb.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I am having a great vacation and want to thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Blueberry scones sound delicious. Your characters are so concerned about everyone's feelings. Maybe they should just let things develop. Interesting that Sami now seems to be the one doing the pursuing. Noah has been able to keep things pretty professional so far. This is quite a change for Sami, as she was so rebellious at first. I can't imagine what being in a safe house would be like, but what you're doing with the situation sounds pretty realistic. Great job. You must be having a great time with family. judi
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Blueberry scones sound delicious. Your characters are so concerned about everyone's feelings. Maybe they should just let things develop. Interesting that Sami now seems to be the one doing the pursuing. Noah has been able to keep things pretty professional so far. This is quite a change for Sami, as she was so rebellious at first. I can't imagine what being in a safe house would be like, but what you're doing with the situation sounds pretty realistic. Great job. You must be having a great time with family. judi
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Sami is still struggles with being rebellious, just in different way.
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You're welcome. Noah seems to know how to handle Sami pretty well. judi
Comment from Sanku
I liked that Noah was human enough to return the hug and admit the he needed it.
I am happy to note that you are with your granddaughters. Enjoy your time wit them!
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I liked that Noah was human enough to return the hug and admit the he needed it.
I am happy to note that you are with your granddaughters. Enjoy your time wit them!
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm having a great time. They're napping right now.
Comment from nomi338
I fully understand the danger of their getting close can put them in. I believe also that if something should even come close to harming Sami, Noah would no doubt go off the deep end and act out of character which could cause further problems. Being emotionally connected is risky at best. But it makes me happy to know that hey have at last acknowledged their feelings for each other.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I fully understand the danger of their getting close can put them in. I believe also that if something should even come close to harming Sami, Noah would no doubt go off the deep end and act out of character which could cause further problems. Being emotionally connected is risky at best. But it makes me happy to know that hey have at last acknowledged their feelings for each other.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Noah will still attempt to remain professional.
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Of course, I would expect no less.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
this was a good chapter. The little things, like her leaving her bra on the dryer adds a bit of authenticity to the story. It will be interesting to see where this goes with the two of them. It seems like they're still a bit uncomfortable with each other still. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Hello Barbara,
this was a good chapter. The little things, like her leaving her bra on the dryer adds a bit of authenticity to the story. It will be interesting to see where this goes with the two of them. It seems like they're still a bit uncomfortable with each other still. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Sami's challenge seems to be to make Noah break a few rules. The rules make sense, but aren't something Sami, from her big family background, can easily live with.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Sami's challenge seems to be to make Noah break a few rules. The rules make sense, but aren't something Sami, from her big family background, can easily live with.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
Hopefully their relationship will be more at ease now after the hugs. Yet they g h ave not known each other for very long so Noah is wise to be both cautious and professional, especially as it seems he has been badly hurt before. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Hopefully their relationship will be more at ease now after the hugs. Yet they g h ave not known each other for very long so Noah is wise to be both cautious and professional, especially as it seems he has been badly hurt before. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review
