Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i used to do that...
i wonder if kids still do... though they're probably to stuck on phones and tablets lol!
sigh...

a great childlike senryu with excellent imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)


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 Comment Written 25-May-2024

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reply by the author on 25-May-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy