Comment from Jumbo J

Exceptional

Hi MariVal,
if this is a bio... which I believe it to be, as you write from the heart... your mother must have been a very beautiful and talented lady.

The warmth created within this senryu poem is felt by this reader and reviewer.

I love the colour scheme and image you have chosen to highlight its perfection, and as always the presentation is a true standout.

Yes, these words echo their sentiment that has an aftertaste of a shared love... beautiful!

With our thoughts we create...
a mirror effect.

Warmest regards,
James.

 Comment Written 25-May-2024

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reply by the author on 25-May-2024

It's about my mom who died when I was 10 years old. We were very close. I was always next to her. I was her little barnacle.
She was sweet, kind, and a very talented seamstress.

Thank you very much, honey. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. You always are so nice to me. I'm happy you like it.

Besitos y abrazos, amigo mio.

MariVal

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

As ever, a beautifully presented senryu in praise of the bond and connection between mother and child, a reflection seen metaphorically as well as literally. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie

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 Comment Written 25-May-2024

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reply by the author on 25-May-2024

Thank you very much 😊 Debbie

Gypsy