Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

You certainly are a funny man. Just one big cut up never at a loss for words or humor in some form twisting about within your skill. And for one, it's always a great way to start my day. Kind of like coffee, with vanilla, chocolate, and cinnamon. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-May-2024

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reply by the author on 22-May-2024

I love to have you be amused, and when I die, I hope you'll be laughing, not crying. That would dilute the coffe.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You searching through the corners of your mind can be quite productive Tom and me-thinks you know exacting what you are doing, you just spill out your words in an order that gives us a puzzle to resolve, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 22-May-2024

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reply by the author on 22-May-2024

Darn and I was trying to be incognito. 😳

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 22-May-2024

Ha ha ha x x x

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Anyone who can properly engage thesaurustically and insert speech bubbles into their photos cannot, by definition, be either abstruse or obtuse.
But FYI - dust bunnies are not real... Until they bite you.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2024

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reply by the author on 22-May-2024

I am glad you are one of my groupies only they would find my dust bunnies funny
Thanks
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Flash Fiction contest. So are you honestly related to George Orwell ? because that's pretty cool. Nicely written but it's no Animal Farm. Good luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 22-May-2024

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reply by the author on 22-May-2024

No I am not related but a dust bunny whispered it to me so I followed it?s lead
Thanks

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

It must be a good skill to be able to look into one's mind and dispassionately review and catalogue it!

dust bunnies lurching
Perhaps your bunnies lurch like drunken sailors, but wasn't sure if you meant lurking about?

Oops, never mind, I looked it up and Brits use it differently than Yanks. I'll try to dispel the drunken sailor image from my mind of your bunnies.

Julie
:-)

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 Comment Written 22-May-2024

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reply by the author on 22-May-2024

I likely thought lurking but lurching rhymes better with searching, though either will work. I may have to edit depending on additional comments. r u o k w/ that?
Luv ya!

reply by Julie Helms on 22-May-2024

Just leave it as is--it means prowling in Brit-ese. You have once again taught me something new :-)
You could put something in the Notes about it to prevent more Yanks from trying to correct you.

reply by the author on 22-May-2024

Ok we?ll see