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Why Women Came To Be

A Ruse to Muse

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Comment from JLR
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Tom, you truly let your hair down on this fun little poem. As a result, I had a couple of chuckles. Thanks for starting my morning off with smiles.

 Comment Written 22-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    I would have never thought this ditty would gain much attention but maybe I should consider using 'adult warnings' on all my releases as I love but rarely see so many reads for me. Thank you. I am glad I had you smile.
Comment from kahpot
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"or the opposite of the right angle
where Adam's thingamajig dangled?"
had to laugh out loud at this.
"a.k.a - like Sean Connery
when playing Bond
without a blond." I'm sure when Haley Berry stepped out of the water, he would have grinned.
Some Mamas have just lost their sense of fun,
very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 22-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    Grinned?.. I would have sinned if only in thought. Halle had it all.
    I am glad you enjoyed the play on words.
    Thanks for your time and comments.
Comment from T B Botts
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Hey Tom,
you're kind of like Star Trek, going boldly where no man has gone before. Fortunately, we have a pretty enlightened crowd here, and I didn't see any comments about anyone being offended. Playboy, Penthouse and countless other magazines would never have come into being if not for man's desire to see women in all their lovely beauty. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    One man's desire becomes another's lust. I remember the day when those rags were abundant, ut like ost things, they have low if any distribution today as the internet has become the devils workshop for FREE!
    Thanks T.B.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Leave it to, Tom, to come up with a beautiful sultry-eyed doll baby that puts evil thoughts in a man's head. All us old sinners stuck in the now and wishing we could just go back one more time. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Not even I want to retreat.
    Onward and Upward, hopefully.
    I'll leave it to Jesus to cleanse my mind should I be accepted.
    As you well know, I have gone where every man has been more than once. Mea culpa!
    :)
reply by Ric Myworld on 21-May-2024
    Faults and errors will be beside my name on the role sheet. :-)
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Not even I want to retreat.
    Onward and Upward, hopefully.
    I'll leave it to Jesus to cleanse my mind should I be accepted.
    As you well know, I have gone where every man has been more than once. Mea culpa!
    :)
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Flip the page over to find your assets. They are there as you have said you care..
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Women, you either love 'em or hate 'em and you are a lover of them here Tom and I enjoyed your sweet natured poem. My husband preferred the company of women than men, he always said that if there were more women leaders there would be less war! A fine post for the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    He could have easily have said if we had bright people we would have had less war, but in America are politicians are bought and paid to donors it seems, save for Trump, he can afford himself.
Comment from jessizero
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I liked your poem about a woman - I thought it was great that you chose to write about the first woman ever. This was fun. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    I always look towards your review of me and pleeeead revisit more than occasionally
    Thanks
Comment from royowen
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I think men and women potentially make one perfect human being, both bring something entirely different, but if unified like they were meant to be, it sets the framework for a successful family. But I know your great little poem, showing those quirky, off set things between men and women, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    That is biologically correct - male + female makes a zygote, right?
reply by royowen on 21-May-2024
    How many have you fertilised Tom? Well done
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Actually- none
    Had thoughts we could but medically it wasn?t to be so we adopted two daughters five years apart
    It turned out fine
reply by royowen on 21-May-2024
    Oh, I?ve done it twice, result two daughters, heh heh.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written post about why women came to be. You used very good descriptive and fun words. The picture you chose went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    And best wishes to you, too. I appreciate your time and kind words.
reply by Teri7 on 21-May-2024
    You are so welcome my friend!
Comment from jmdg1954
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Good afternoon, Tom. Written and presented in your 'one of a kind style'!

People who know you on this site or read your posts should not be offended, even by Adam's thing-ama-jig reference.

Well done and rhymed.

Thanks for the smile...

John

 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    I... have a one of a kind style???
    Jackpot! I always wanted to be... different, and now with your licensing of me as unique I have accomplished it. :-)
Comment from karenina
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Nobody has quite the wit to pull this off, except you. I see it as a compliment to women and I'd battle with anyone who says otherwise.

That "thingamajig" was the perfect "work-around" for -- well -- being more graphic. (We're pretty perceptive around here, after all)

(They had English Leather in EDEN!? -- I missed that chapter in the Bible!)

LOL,

Karenina



 Comment Written 21-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Well, that was told to me by a Brit who was known for their propensity to stretch truths. In fact, that's why they were asked to leave Eden and end in Moab. :-)
reply by karenina on 21-May-2024
    Hmmm. Glad you had the inside scoop!

    :)