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At Home in Mississippi

Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Favorites, Fears, and Willpower"
Growing up in the 40 and 50 in MIssissippi

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Comment from forestport12
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The candy bar scene reminded me of when my son was five and hid under a bed and had a bowl of candy. We went through the apartment and all around the complex screaming for him and praying he wasn't kidnapped. Then finally he pops up from under the bed with big chocolate smile! I love reading these revealing stories of family. It reminds of Earl Hammner and the Waltons.

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 17-May-2024
    Thank you so much for trhe review and comments. Your story reminds me of one my late husband told abou his little brother. The family had just gathered their peanut crop. They didn't unterstand why he getting so fat all of a sudden. Then they realizec he was spenting hours under the bed every day eating raw peanuts.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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No I'll intent intended.
This
Is a special
Journal
Entry
One that your family will
Hopefully find endearing but what non-family members can say will
Hold little
Water so doing a
Review is a challenge

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 17-May-2024
    No problem. You don't have to read them if you find them a challenge. I think the those who lived near times they were written enjoy them more than my family because they trigger their own memories.
reply by Tom Horonzy on 17-May-2024
    I can see that but my memories were different being from Philadelphia
    Now, my wife with her family farm life would enjoy it more
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Yes, I heard that swallowing the watermelon seed, Also, there was one about being born in the cabbage patch. The kids these days have no idea the kind of get up we women had to use when we had periods, My Mom dod not believe in tampons. I didn't get to use them until I got married. Your story was very familiar in many ways. You write these stories so well.
Karen

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 24-May-2024
    Thank you Karen. I think they could have come up with something that would make is want to avoid watermelon. I hope the move is going well.
    Beth
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
    Thank you Karen. I think they could have come up with something that would make is want to avoid watermelon. I hope the move is going well.
    Beth
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 29-May-2024
    Lots involved in a move. This is temporary while I find an apartment or house. Tired. sore. happy. :-)
Comment from karenina
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I enjoy your journey back to your youth and smile at the similarities I see here. I too was told a "pregnant" stomach was inevitably the result of swallowing a watermelon seed. I also had my "secret" favorites but enjoyed your colorful descriptions of each of yours! I can't say I ever tried that willpower on candy (no way!) -- but I was a spendthrift and loved opening my Piggy Bank and counting the coins as they grew exponentially! Can you imagine a child today being happy with a 25-cent allowance? By ten, my grandkids were asking for cell phones!

Karenina

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 26-May-2024
    Thank you Karenina. I'm so glad you are enjoying my little stories. I really enjoy your reviews. My children are all spendthrifts so my hangup didn't rub off on them.
    Beth
reply by karenina on 27-May-2024
    Your stories always delight and entertain!
Comment from jmdg1954
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Beth, great story. I could relate to many lines in your story, I'm guessing we are the approximate same age.
Values years ago was different then today and even though we tried to instill some of them into our kids, times got the better of them,

Nicely posted...
John

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 26-May-2024
    Thank you John. I'm pretty sure I'm older than you, but things didn't change that much over a decade. Now things seem to be changing more repidly.
    Beth
Comment from jim vecchio
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I truly love these tales, each worthy of more than a mere five stars. Fathers love to spoil their little girls. I'd come home daily with aq little doll or treat for my daughter till I was told to stop. There were dolls and toys all over. My mother was the disciplinarian, often using aq well-deserved strap. My father was worse, always letting me know how much I shamed them. But God saw fit to help turn this around before his death.

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 18-May-2024
    You are so kind with your reviews. If my dad had a problem with something I was doing. He yelled at mama about it but not me. I don't know why he never wanted to correct me. He had a bad temper and some he gave Mom a hard time. He got better before he died too.
reply by jim vecchio on 18-May-2024
    My mom had to be the disciplinarian because my father either worked or was resting before work much of the time. With his meager salary, he supported us well.
Comment from Ben Colder
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It is the rotten leadsership we have that has destoryed the value of the dollar. No wonder kids now days think spending every dime id the thing to do. Good one, Beth.

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 18-May-2024
    Thank you for the review. I so far behind. If miss one day I can't seem to catch up. I have over a hundred things I need to review.
    Beth
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Excellent. And well written, too.
There's no way that I could recall details like that when I was three. Your memory is extraordinary.
I'm certain I would not get past 3 candy bars. I would declare myself the winner and go back to eatin' 'em.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 21-May-2024
    Thank you Wayne. I appreciate the review and comments. I'm glad you liked it.
    Beth
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I find these stories absolutely charming and always enjoy getting into the mind of your three year old mind. Here you tell us about the important hierarchy of relatives who influence your growing-up in some way. Your inquisitiveness and secrets stand out for me. Quite clearly, you have a very active imagination that needs plenty of stimulation (Grandpa Weir understood that!) A couple of edits:
never seem(ed) to lose it with me; world(')s best cornbread.
Another excellent chapter, Beth! Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 26-May-2024
    Tahnk you Debbie. I'm so glad you don't find ming three year old brain boring. I really appreciate your review and help.
    Beth
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written and I enjoyed listening to. It was very very well when it is about your paragraphing and you're saying the structure is very good. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I know that you're going to enjoy putting things in your book and I wish you the best with the book. Patricia .

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 26-May-2024
    Thank you Patricia. I'm so glad you are enjoying reading my stories.
    I always appreciate your reviews.
    Beth