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Ambiguously Blue

zeno poem (potlatch club entry)

12 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I like the changing of color it illustrates your voice. I haven't seen you in a while.I hope you have been okay. You reviewed me, so, I reviewed you. Nice work. Karen

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 Comment Written 15-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Hi Karen, thanks for the review :) I've not been around much so don't often get chance to read and review...
    Stay well! Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice photo and presentation, Debra.
-I like your font colors, as well.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery using blue as the theme.
-A good opening verse with blueberries.
-A good contrast in verse two.
-Good use of comparison/contrast in the
last verse between bluebells and blueberries.
-Well done; I enjoyed your poem.

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 Comment Written 15-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Hello Pam, I hope you are well :) Thank you for your lovely feedback, I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my poem. Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by Pam (respa) on 16-May-2024
    You are very welcome, Debra, and I appreciate your reply. I am doing well and hope you are too.