Ambiguously Blue
zeno poem (potlatch club entry)12 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I like the changing of color it illustrates your voice. I haven't seen you in a while.I hope you have been okay. You reviewed me, so, I reviewed you. Nice work. Karen
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reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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I like the changing of color it illustrates your voice. I haven't seen you in a while.I hope you have been okay. You reviewed me, so, I reviewed you. Nice work. Karen
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Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Hi Karen, thanks for the review :) I've not been around much so don't often get chance to read and review...
Stay well! Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice photo and presentation, Debra.
-I like your font colors, as well.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery using blue as the theme.
-A good opening verse with blueberries.
-A good contrast in verse two.
-Good use of comparison/contrast in the
last verse between bluebells and blueberries.
-Well done; I enjoyed your poem.
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reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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-Very nice photo and presentation, Debra.
-I like your font colors, as well.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery using blue as the theme.
-A good opening verse with blueberries.
-A good contrast in verse two.
-Good use of comparison/contrast in the
last verse between bluebells and blueberries.
-Well done; I enjoyed your poem.
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Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Hello Pam, I hope you are well :) Thank you for your lovely feedback, I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my poem. Best wishes as always, Debra x
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You are very welcome, Debra, and I appreciate your reply. I am doing well and hope you are too.