Mint Julep Moon
Rocking on the porch13 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
That's beautiful, warm, lazy, contented and so, so foreign. With me it's plovers, kookaburras, magpies, tawny frogmouths... oh, but we do have crickets!
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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That's beautiful, warm, lazy, contented and so, so foreign. With me it's plovers, kookaburras, magpies, tawny frogmouths... oh, but we do have crickets!
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you so much--yours sound quite interesting, too!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your gave us a clear picture of a tranquil evening in the Southern bayou. The imagery you use, from the rhythmic creak of the rocking chair to the sounds of nature like woodpeckers creates a serene atmosphere. I love that! The use of local dialect makes this seem so real! I felt like I was there. The use of sounds, such as "neak, neak" and "whoo!" made this feel almost like a song. Great job. Your poem is so creative and enjoyable.
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reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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I thought your gave us a clear picture of a tranquil evening in the Southern bayou. The imagery you use, from the rhythmic creak of the rocking chair to the sounds of nature like woodpeckers creates a serene atmosphere. I love that! The use of local dialect makes this seem so real! I felt like I was there. The use of sounds, such as "neak, neak" and "whoo!" made this feel almost like a song. Great job. Your poem is so creative and enjoyable.
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Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind comments. I appreciate your feedback.
Comment from EeanBlack
My dark mind sees a gator on the porch and one less stocking to darn. To feel those nights again once before I'm gone would priceless. To feel it every night, heaven.
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reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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My dark mind sees a gator on the porch and one less stocking to darn. To feel those nights again once before I'm gone would priceless. To feel it every night, heaven.
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Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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LOL! Always a possibility! Thank you so much for your review.