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Comment from RJ Heritage
Love can bring sadness, if and when it's not respected and reciprocal. Sometimes, even when it is.
I am a romantic, I am told, but I don't see it myself. I guess you can choose to express love in your unique way, but I feel there are always things that must be there. Like kindness and unselfishness, for it to be really love, yet these things must prevail, as we are imperfect we don't always express it correctly.
Nice poem.
RJ
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Love can bring sadness, if and when it's not respected and reciprocal. Sometimes, even when it is.
I am a romantic, I am told, but I don't see it myself. I guess you can choose to express love in your unique way, but I feel there are always things that must be there. Like kindness and unselfishness, for it to be really love, yet these things must prevail, as we are imperfect we don't always express it correctly.
Nice poem.
RJ
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Love is different for most people. I am a romantic too. Sometimes I write happy love poems and sometimes I write sad ones full of yearning and loss. I'm from Spain, poets tend to be dramatic. You are right, true love requires kindness, selfishness, and trust. Unfortunately, I never had that kind of love so it's easy to pull grief and yearning from my own life, though not biographical.... you know what I mean.
Thank you very much, RJ
gypsy
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You are welcome
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written work that holds the attention of the reader that there are wonderful ways of describing things this is a terrifically articulate way of doing it, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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A beautifully written work that holds the attention of the reader that there are wonderful ways of describing things this is a terrifically articulate way of doing it, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy, may you have a wonderful day.
gypsy
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You too
Comment from lyenochka
You always capture the feeling of longing and year yearning so well. I liked your refrain "I can write the saddest song tonight" and it grows sadder through poem.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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You always capture the feeling of longing and year yearning so well. I liked your refrain "I can write the saddest song tonight" and it grows sadder through poem.
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Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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I know, I was readining Pablo Neruda poems, they are sad as well. He was an excellent poet.
It was sad, I am going to write something light and funny next (*+*)
Thank you very much, Big Sister.
love,
marival
