Silent Voices
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "iVanish"Verses of personification
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Comment from Sally Law
Oh, this is hilarious! I've done this. Thank goodness I realized it right away. I'm glad it wasn't the microwave! Yikes! Poor thing....
Wonderful poem for your book. Congratulations on finishing your 30 days, Jess! I'm looking forward to the vote.
All my best,
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Oh, this is hilarious! I've done this. Thank goodness I realized it right away. I'm glad it wasn't the microwave! Yikes! Poor thing....
Wonderful poem for your book. Congratulations on finishing your 30 days, Jess! I'm looking forward to the vote.
All my best,
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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lol thank you so much, my dear friend! Xoxo
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Yes, if cell phones had feelings, they would never consent to a continuing relationship with any of us. A fun take on the life (and feelings) of a cell phone.
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Yes, if cell phones had feelings, they would never consent to a continuing relationship with any of us. A fun take on the life (and feelings) of a cell phone.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
This poem brilliantly captures the frustrations of a misplaced mobile phone, personifying it with humor and wit. The speaker, embodying the device, laments being neglected and shuffled around by its owner, highlighting the annoyance and inconvenience caused by being constantly misplaced. Thanks for sharing.
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This poem brilliantly captures the frustrations of a misplaced mobile phone, personifying it with humor and wit. The speaker, embodying the device, laments being neglected and shuffled around by its owner, highlighting the annoyance and inconvenience caused by being constantly misplaced. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
Comment from lyenochka
I guess the title is "iVanish" for the "iPhone". I enjoyed this little pouting rant by the forgotten phone. I thought there was some app that helped locate it. Great personification here!
Is this your last one since it's April 30?
I saw Robyn had put two poems in one post and wondered if you could do that but you'd need six more days of two to finish 30 poems.
Anyway, I have enjoyed all your poems!
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I guess the title is "iVanish" for the "iPhone". I enjoyed this little pouting rant by the forgotten phone. I thought there was some app that helped locate it. Great personification here!
Is this your last one since it's April 30?
I saw Robyn had put two poems in one post and wondered if you could do that but you'd need six more days of two to finish 30 poems.
Anyway, I have enjoyed all your poems!
Comment Written 01-May-2024
Comment from royowen
I like this post, a little on the side of a stream of consciousness, I love the articulate Randomness of thought, I think we all go through this process of sorting through our day to day dreamingness, beautifully written Jessica, blessings Roy
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I like this post, a little on the side of a stream of consciousness, I love the articulate Randomness of thought, I think we all go through this process of sorting through our day to day dreamingness, beautifully written Jessica, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This form is very well written and I understand that about losing the cell phone. I get up in the morning and get my shower and get dressed and I wear pants with pocket and I put my cell phone in the pocket and it stays there most of the day except when I have to take it out to make a call, but when I answer a call either one, but when I do, I always put it back in my pocket so I always know where it is. Patricia .
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This form is very well written and I understand that about losing the cell phone. I get up in the morning and get my shower and get dressed and I wear pants with pocket and I put my cell phone in the pocket and it stays there most of the day except when I have to take it out to make a call, but when I answer a call either one, but when I do, I always put it back in my pocket so I always know where it is. Patricia .
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I am giving this a six star review because I misplaced my cell phone last night. I appreciate the last stanza very much and the line: stuck in knicks and knacks. Mine was outside getting rained on slightly after weeding. I like this line: Pouting, seeking pity for myself. The phone has the right to complain.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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I am giving this a six star review because I misplaced my cell phone last night. I appreciate the last stanza very much and the line: stuck in knicks and knacks. Mine was outside getting rained on slightly after weeding. I like this line: Pouting, seeking pity for myself. The phone has the right to complain.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Lol! Oh, know! I hope your poor cell phone survived. Mine sends its sympathy. (from wherever it is)
Thank you so much for this review!!
Xo
