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Comment from royowen
He's quite obviously afraid of what you might do to his kingdom, so cheer up, you're obviously worth much to God, so be encouraged, surely it's got to get better, thanks for.sharing Karen, well done,blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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He's quite obviously afraid of what you might do to his kingdom, so cheer up, you're obviously worth much to God, so be encouraged, surely it's got to get better, thanks for.sharing Karen, well done,blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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I do feel I am still here for a reason. As long as I feel this way, I will fit the good fight. Plus, God doesn't like quitters. :-) Karen
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Yep, I agree
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:-)
Comment from Mark Jackson
I like this, I am a Terry Pratchett fan and so I a version of Death and his works. Your Death is not that Death I think you might be being stalked by an impostor. Couple of issues that could do with changing I think: Sometimes I wonder if it is worth the fight.
he would wait more patiently.
5 stars good writing.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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I like this, I am a Terry Pratchett fan and so I a version of Death and his works. Your Death is not that Death I think you might be being stalked by an impostor. Couple of issues that could do with changing I think: Sometimes I wonder if it is worth the fight.
he would wait more patiently.
5 stars good writing.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Mark, my bearded friend, I looked over the story again, and I like it just the way it is. But, keep giving me your viewpoint, I listen and I review.
A lot of time I make changes. Just not today. :-)
Karen
Comment from LJbutterfly
Death is a strong, evil spirit, forever looking to see who he can devour. You are an even stronger Heavenly spirit, backed by God, your creator, who determines when and where we will join Him. I pray you continue your good fight.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Death is a strong, evil spirit, forever looking to see who he can devour. You are an even stronger Heavenly spirit, backed by God, your creator, who determines when and where we will join Him. I pray you continue your good fight.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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I do feel I am here for a reason. And, as long as I feel that way I will fight the good fight. Thank you for your kind thoughts.Karen :-)
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Oh, to have escaped Death so many times, in so many ways. I like the way you have personified him, revealing his character, exposing his devious ways. And your words invite us to reflect on its inevitable approach.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Oh, to have escaped Death so many times, in so many ways. I like the way you have personified him, revealing his character, exposing his devious ways. And your words invite us to reflect on its inevitable approach.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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I cannot really outrun death, but I can distract him. I did die for a few seconds during one of my operations, and I did see a tunnel and a light. I saw relatives that had passed, and they told me to go back. I think we see what our minds can comprehend. I am going to write an alliterative poem contest, I think. Thanks for the read.Karen
Comment from BethShelby
Those are grave thoughts. It does seem you have won out because you are a strong woman who doesn't plan to give in easily to your nemesis. He pursues us all, so I try to ignore him. He will likely win out someday, but I hope I don't see him coming.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Those are grave thoughts. It does seem you have won out because you are a strong woman who doesn't plan to give in easily to your nemesis. He pursues us all, so I try to ignore him. He will likely win out someday, but I hope I don't see him coming.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thanks for the read.I cannot really outrun death, but I can distract him. I did die for a few seconds during one of my operations, and I did see a tunnel and a light. I saw relatives that had passed, and they told me to go back. I think we see what our minds can comprehend. I am going to write an alliterative poem contest, I think. Thanks for the read.Karen
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I find those Near Death expreieces very interesting. I like to hear yours. Why don't you write about it.
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That was about it. It was very brief. only a couple of seconds.
Karen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Interesting post, I'm not sure if it's fiction or nonfiction. I understand the feeling defeated with calamity to calamity and why you are not dead. There must be a reason why.
Well done
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Interesting post, I'm not sure if it's fiction or nonfiction. I understand the feeling defeated with calamity to calamity and why you are not dead. There must be a reason why.
Well done
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thanks for reading me.I cannot really outrun death, but I can distract him. I did die for a few seconds during one of my operations, and I did see a tunnel and a light. I saw relatives that had passed, and they told me to go back. I think we see what our minds can comprehend. I am going to write an alliterative poem contest, I think. Thanks for the read.Karen
Comment from karenina
I wonder if we all have these thoughts as we age and health and other challenges seem to come fast and furious. I can relate. I'm THRILLED to awaken to a new dawn each day, yet I think of how, even at my age, I've still lived ten years longer than my mother did. Five years longer than my father. There are days I fear the Grim Reaper is gaining ground. I'm not ready yet! (Are we ever?)
This is listed as "General Fiction" but it seems to be a true expose' of emotions to me. It is also, equally capable of being defined as free verse.
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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I wonder if we all have these thoughts as we age and health and other challenges seem to come fast and furious. I can relate. I'm THRILLED to awaken to a new dawn each day, yet I think of how, even at my age, I've still lived ten years longer than my mother did. Five years longer than my father. There are days I fear the Grim Reaper is gaining ground. I'm not ready yet! (Are we ever?)
This is listed as "General Fiction" but it seems to be a true expose' of emotions to me. It is also, equally capable of being defined as free verse.
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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This was part real, and part fiction. Rhank you for reading me.I cannot really outrun death, but I can distract him. I did die for a few seconds during one of my operations, and I did see a tunnel and a light. I saw relatives that had passed, and they told me to go back. I think we see what our minds can comprehend. I am going to write an alliterative poem contest, I think. Thanks for the read.Karen
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You are very welcome. You should write about your NDE!
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That was about all there was to it. :-)
Comment from lyenochka
You have had quite a health struggle all your life but you have a strong spirit which comes out clearly in this poem-like prose. There's something peaceful about the struggle with Death as we age, especially when we believe that Christ has conquered Death for us.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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You have had quite a health struggle all your life but you have a strong spirit which comes out clearly in this poem-like prose. There's something peaceful about the struggle with Death as we age, especially when we believe that Christ has conquered Death for us.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you for reading me.I cannot really outrun death, but I can distract him. I did die for a few seconds during one of my operations, and I did see a tunnel and a light. I saw relatives that had passed, and they told me to go back. I think we see what our minds can comprehend. I am going to write an alliterative poem contest, I think. Thanks for the read.Karen
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It is amazing how in one site like this that several people have had that same experience! Alie also technically died on the operating table. There was another. Thanks for sharing!
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I would imagine quite a few people have had the experience. We just have always been told not to discuss it. Karen
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've kind of been worried about you all week since I hadn't seen you around. But figured you might be busy or just wanted a break, not literally. Now it's sounding like you've not had a great week; so, I'm hoping the weekend gets better. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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I've kind of been worried about you all week since I hadn't seen you around. But figured you might be busy or just wanted a break, not literally. Now it's sounding like you've not had a great week; so, I'm hoping the weekend gets better. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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I am moving May 18th to Plano outside Dallas where m y sisters are. I have been busy with packing and arranging. I am looking forward to living close to my family. They will help me run errands, do laundry, Yippee! Life is looking up. Thanks for the read Karen
Comment from jessizero
This was a great and somewhat gloomy story. I rather enjoyed it. You did a great job building the tension in this piece. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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This was a great and somewhat gloomy story. I rather enjoyed it. You did a great job building the tension in this piece. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the read.I cannot really outrun death, but I can distract him. I did die for a few seconds during one of my operations, and I did see a tunnel and a light. I saw relatives that had passed, and they told me to go back. I think we see what our minds can comprehend. I am going to write an alliterative poem contest, I think. Thanks for the read.Karen
