A Day in the Life
Have kids, they said, It will be fun, they said.12 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed reading this humorous poem about a day in the life of a young
Mom with an especially active and curious little one who seemed to enjoy making messes.
Great rhyming and strong meter along with wild images make this a fun read. It's sure to do well in the contest. Good luck.
Nancy
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed reading this humorous poem about a day in the life of a young
Mom with an especially active and curious little one who seemed to enjoy making messes.
Great rhyming and strong meter along with wild images make this a fun read. It's sure to do well in the contest. Good luck.
Nancy
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Mark Jackson
The structure of the poem is clever and dynamic, with a rhythm that mirrors the energy and exuberance of a little one at play. The pacing is brisk, capturing the whirlwind of activity that accompanies caring for a baby.
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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The structure of the poem is clever and dynamic, with a rhythm that mirrors the energy and exuberance of a little one at play. The pacing is brisk, capturing the whirlwind of activity that accompanies caring for a baby.
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much. She was a pistol at 3--still is at 43!
