Comment from GoWiSt

Excellent

"Not really. Just kidding!
You are so ... so ... clever!" But you really are!
Nice complementary picture art choice.
Good reading flow and aabb rhyme scheme to your quatrains.
"You don't think of yourself as a silly twit!" Pff, speak for yourself; I know I am.
" I am just an old bore!" Well, better that, I guess, than an old wh...
Good luck in the contest! :-))



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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for this fun review, much appreciated. And yes, one must take care with the choice of rhyming words!

Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

I am hoping that you are both of these people, I think many of us have more than one personality contained within ourselves. However being that person does sound exhausting.

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 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024

Lol. A tiny bit of me is like the first part, but I fear that mostly I am more like the second. Thanks so much for a super review.