Dandelions
Crescendo Poem.21 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I love it! Yes, those dandelion seed heads are so inviting - almost asking us to blow them but as you say, the wishes fall flat. And Mother Earth readily proliferates those wishes into more dandelions! Loved your crescendo poem!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I love it! Yes, those dandelion seed heads are so inviting - almost asking us to blow them but as you say, the wishes fall flat. And Mother Earth readily proliferates those wishes into more dandelions! Loved your crescendo poem!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Though they are weeds they are pretty .Thank you very much Helen.
Comment from mermaids
I love dandelions and am always happy to come across a poem about them. Your words capture the essence of the dandelion. "They blithely entreat us to blow their fluff" is a creative line that paints a picture of one blowing the fluff apart and making a wish. Excellent nature poem with a feel of magic to it.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I love dandelions and am always happy to come across a poem about them. Your words capture the essence of the dandelion. "They blithely entreat us to blow their fluff" is a creative line that paints a picture of one blowing the fluff apart and making a wish. Excellent nature poem with a feel of magic to it.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much Thank you .
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written for the club Van and I wish you a very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful rest of the week and may your weekend be blessed by God. Patricia .
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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This is very nicely written for the club Van and I wish you a very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful rest of the week and may your weekend be blessed by God. Patricia .
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have a saying hung up on my computer. 'When you look at a field of dandelions, you can see either a field of weeds or a field of wishes.' I happen to choose the field of wishes. LOL Thank you for sharing this clut entry with us. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I have a saying hung up on my computer. 'When you look at a field of dandelions, you can see either a field of weeds or a field of wishes.' I happen to choose the field of wishes. LOL Thank you for sharing this clut entry with us. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from GWHARGIS
What a captivating poem. You set a brightly covered stage with the dancing yellow flowers and the puffy magic seed that can carry our wishes with them. Sadly, out wishes fall. Beautiful and poignant. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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What a captivating poem. You set a brightly covered stage with the dancing yellow flowers and the puffy magic seed that can carry our wishes with them. Sadly, out wishes fall. Beautiful and poignant. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Yeah all wishful thinking.thank you very much.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I like your poem. My grandkids always like to blow them and make a wish. I wrote a small poem on them
When I first joined story. Your poem is bright and cheery. The pictures of the dandelions is a good choice for the poem. Very good job.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I like your poem. My grandkids always like to blow them and make a wish. I wrote a small poem on them
When I first joined story. Your poem is bright and cheery. The pictures of the dandelions is a good choice for the poem. Very good job.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Children love that ! Thank you very much.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I won't double-check to see if you dotted your i's and crossed your t's as it seems to be in order to be a Crescendo poem. I think I entered one as well but not about flowers. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I won't double-check to see if you dotted your i's and crossed your t's as it seems to be in order to be a Crescendo poem. I think I entered one as well but not about flowers. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Mark Jackson
This is good writing the the effect of the crescendo is slightly lost because the text is a point or two too large. This makes your poem drop over onto two lines in a couple of places and is losing the effect of building up down the page.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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This is good writing the the effect of the crescendo is slightly lost because the text is a point or two too large. This makes your poem drop over onto two lines in a couple of places and is losing the effect of building up down the page.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written free form poem Santha, you've written a marvellous word, talking about the symbolic flight of the dandelion seeds clothed in a very lightly conceived airborne fluffy, feathery covering that flies the seeds to their destination. Beautifully written My friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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A beautifully written free form poem Santha, you've written a marvellous word, talking about the symbolic flight of the dandelion seeds clothed in a very lightly conceived airborne fluffy, feathery covering that flies the seeds to their destination. Beautifully written My friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank. You very much
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Most welcome
Comment from Mrs. KT
Very much enjoyed, Santha, both the form and your message.
And how I love dandelions!
Going to make a picture of a lion with my grandson using dandelions as the lion's mane! Great fun!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Very much enjoyed, Santha, both the form and your message.
And how I love dandelions!
Going to make a picture of a lion with my grandson using dandelions as the lion's mane! Great fun!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much. hope you have made that picture It would be unusual.
