Still Wrapped
A four-line poem15 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Surely you must be joking. Surely these would be the best gifts you could bestow on any man, I wouldn't send them back dear friend, great post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Surely you must be joking. Surely these would be the best gifts you could bestow on any man, I wouldn't send them back dear friend, great post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Roy, yes, it may have came across like that, but I was trying to say is the world and its leaders are slowly making a mess of it all, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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With the people
Comment from tfawcus
Yes, sad that mankind as a whole seems so intent at the moment on discarding this God-given birthright. Fortunately, there are always a few who will do their best to retain it. More, I think, than the Hydra-headed media would lead us to believe.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Yes, sad that mankind as a whole seems so intent at the moment on discarding this God-given birthright. Fortunately, there are always a few who will do their best to retain it. More, I think, than the Hydra-headed media would lead us to believe.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Exactly, thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark Jackson
This seems to be very sad. I think I know what it is about, the ultimate loss for a couple I would say. It is a brave subject to write about and you have done it with style and grace. Amazing in so few words. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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This seems to be very sad. I think I know what it is about, the ultimate loss for a couple I would say. It is a brave subject to write about and you have done it with style and grace. Amazing in so few words. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Mark, for your exceptional comments and six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
That is sad but we are born and yet we all are returned to the Sender. Yet, I like that the person is "wrapped" and the gifts are "love, peace and freedom". Yet, I wonder if the "wrapped" title is referring to a child who is "still born" and never had a chance to live outside of the womb.
Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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That is sad but we are born and yet we all are returned to the Sender. Yet, I like that the person is "wrapped" and the gifts are "love, peace and freedom". Yet, I wonder if the "wrapped" title is referring to a child who is "still born" and never had a chance to live outside of the womb.
Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, I can see now where I may have got a bit lost with this one, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This post has a very sad undertone, life is precious and those gifts should be welcomes and appreciated, not returned to sender. A poignant write, food for thought, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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This post has a very sad undertone, life is precious and those gifts should be welcomes and appreciated, not returned to sender. A poignant write, food for thought, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Dolly, for your wonderful co, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
